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Published: 2007-10-09 20:36:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description One fine day I decided I would save you from me
you really needed it, and frankly my dear, I would have happily been your doom.
How I would have relished seeing you in pain
my little painted marionette...
So sweet, dangling from the lovely loft you wallpapered
oh so paitently in the perfect shade of soft green,
"Isn't it calm?" you always asked.
How much gratification I would have gotten from the scene? Well dear,
the answer my frighten you,
so, I do grudgingly decide
against my will
to see you alive
it makes me sad every time I see your hypocritical little face...
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Comments: 3

EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-10-09 21:23:39 +0000 UTC]

IIIII like it...the only part I'm not so sure about is the last line...hmm...what if you changed it or just didn't include it? hm, I don't know. but I like it overall.

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-10-09 22:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks man....better than when you butchered to hell in class...! Hmmm...alright I'll think abouts it....thanks for the fav dearest...

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EmbersOfAnAlibi In reply to AddictiveSimplicity [2007-10-10 01:57:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah, it's a bit easier to read when it's typed...no problem...

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