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AdeNemesis — Fragmented Memory

Published: 2006-04-03 19:03:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description I locked it in a wooden drawer
A dusty place to keep
Beneath my bedside books
In darkness so discrete

The crumpled pages words
Speak soft and without heart
An echo of two bodies
that are better off apart
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Comments: 7

crimsonterror [2006-04-05 22:28:38 +0000 UTC]

Crap I hate being a romantic...
Its lovely dude, very simple, very striking. You told me before that it was 'just' a short poem, I think not man.
Poetry is great and all when its grand and huge, but sometimes people forget the meaning and emotion behind the poem then, I really do like this. Its short, sweet and does what its supposed to do. KUDOS! lol

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AdeNemesis In reply to crimsonterror [2006-04-06 21:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you man!! Such kind words Cheers!

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snowflake-obsidian [2006-04-04 11:59:39 +0000 UTC]

????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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AdeNemesis In reply to snowflake-obsidian [2006-04-04 17:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes?

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snowflake-obsidian In reply to AdeNemesis [2006-04-06 15:23:24 +0000 UTC]

its confusing and sad. i dont understand

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paranoid-void [2006-04-03 19:20:35 +0000 UTC]

I love it - very emotional piece Giz.

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AdeNemesis In reply to paranoid-void [2006-04-03 19:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Rach!

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