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adnansonic โ Fight me if you dare
Published: 2013-10-14 10:30:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 3668; Favourites: 106; Downloads: 20
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That pose looks awkward and very painful on the right leg and neck. Let me explain how.
The head looks scrunched up, in fact, TOO scrunched up against the torso. How would you like to stand in a position like that with your head tilted down and pushed up hard against your body? It would not feel good.
Both of his arm positions are awkward. His arms look misplaced, and are in very weird positions. The left arm should be tilted on the Z-axis some more to where the hand is more beside/in front of his face, rather than behind it. Er... Beside it? I don't know. His right hand looks... Broken. It's tilted in such a way that makes it look broken. Also, what's with that piece of cloth up there behind Sonic's muzzle? I can see a small bit of that. What is that? His eye? Is he wearing the longest glove-cuff?
His face looks un-modeled. Did you not touch his face at all? It would give the picture more feeling that he's going to fight. But, here, he just has the neutral expression that I see every time I open up my modeling program. You should probably fix that.
As for the feet and legs, they're better than the last picture I critiqued on. The bottoms of the shoes, just above the rims of the soles, are very black and spray-painty. What's with that? Are you have a problem with textures?
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Anytime for my hedgehog hero!!! ^_^
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thank you my new friend
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thanks my friend
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Your welcomeย
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how is the stuped guy that told you that your poses are good they are disgusting
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well, he is you, you who told me that my poses are good, ha, really Adnan, let's talk seriously, my poses are really so amazing
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i told you that your poses on the paper ( by pencil ) but at computer your poses are sucks
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no I disagree, because my poses on computer are the same ones of my poses on paper, I first draw them on papers and then I make them on computer
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Is very cool!
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You're welcome
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What programm do you use?
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This is amazing!
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Thanks I'm using 3ds max
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thank you so much ^__^
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wowowowowwowoowowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoowwwwwwwwww, that's the paint which I was waiting from you it's soooooooooooooooooooo awesome the pose the materials the lights there are no mistakes great job
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thank you there is another one one the way its much better materials
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ok, I'll be waiting for it my teacher
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