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AdoptaChirimo — Yukis-Promise: Selvian
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Published: 2009-10-22 20:04:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 973; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 1
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We thank everyone that have entered the contest
The winner was ~Falon-chan with a lovely little story we both liked very much! Congratulation! To the rest, all stories were really good And better luck next time!!To get him, you need to enter a contest!
Isn't he a darling? ^^ Took some serious time to make him too. So, he's a contest Chirimo. The contest is to make him a background story. Where does he come from? How did he grow up? Etc. The rules are these:
- One entry per person and keep it in comment length
no notes.- Most creative story wins (seen from my point of view and my co-judge =Zerelixon
- You'll have until monday
(I live in GTM +1)- Don't complain about the results please...
- Including a name for him in the story might work for your benefit
Good luck!!!
Name: Selvian
Gender: Male
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Comments: 64
woah i just thought of an amazing idea! you could totally make a lineart and have ot for people to make up their own and if it is good enough you could put it up for adoption!!! (i only mean for the adoption thing i dont mena for them to keep it... it would be kinda like a contest thing)
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how do you do your art? are you digital art? thats what it looks like 
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They are digital yes. Not sure what you mean with downloading digital art though <.<
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oh cool i have a new idea for a adoption pet you can put up one! try one with yellow and black with a white streek on its nose X3 oh can i give you ideas? plz plz plz plz! for new ones plz plz plz plz!!!!
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Whoa, hyper much? XD I do have two people to help me already though and I ask them when I'm stuck... I am very lazy and not a good candidate for ideas XD Sorry, but not interested
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just before we start, he is kinda like an otter in the way that he swims alot and practically live in water. if i get him ill draw up a ref sheet for him and his familly :3
story:
Prince Oromei has always lived with his parents, the great king Oro (where his name came from) and the great queen Anatasy who cherished him so much through out his childhood. When oromei reached maturity, his mother had paired him with a few future queens but none were to his taste.
One day ,Oromei was swimming under water, looking for more shells for his collection when he came face to face with one of his own.
Droping his shells, he then swam in panic towards the surface. When he got to the surface,he noticed that the creature he was afraid of was but a female. She slowely poked her head out of the water to look at him with worried eyes.
¨Are you...ok?¨ she asks him.
¨Y-you¨he stoped to catch himself.¨You are not supposed to be here, this is my private sea bank.¨he explans to her, looking around at the souroundings kind of showing it off.
¨...¨she looked around noticing that she had swam too far off. She was busy looking for sea shells as well.
¨Im so sorry, i must of got lost in though when i was collecting shells, and-¨she was cut off.
¨you like shells too? I collect them myself¨He said proudly. ¨which royal family were you born from?¨
she lowered her head at royal family and replied ¨im...im not of royal blood.¨She shyly lifted her eyes withough lifting her head.
to be continued :3
i have more, but i dont want to write too much X3
tell me what you think
BTW the female will be klovn [link] since she is beautiful and sorta fish like ^^
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Aww so cute! I so want to see what happens next
*w*
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i wrote a bit more, go check it out ^^
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Someones a bit of a klutz!
Good luck in the competition
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thank you very much!
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hehehe i guess i can write more :3
continuation:
as she lifted her head, she saw a worry in his blue eyes.
¨...what?¨ she asked a bit worried herself
¨oh nothing¨ he smiles a gorious smile and swam to shore.
¨...are you sure?...OH, are YOU of royal blood?¨ she instigated as she fallowed him.
he paused.
¨uhh...nah, i couldent be, im not prince material...¨he shook his fur full of water then whispered ¨let alone king...¨he sighed
relieved to know that he wasent of royal blood, she shook as well, not hearing him sigh.
they started to walk through a small clearing with tall grass and animals all around. he walked in front of her slowely, not really knowing where hes going.
¨the name is orom- uhh meii- meiko¨he caught himself, knowing that his name was very known in this area. woried that she caught on to it, he turned to look at her.
she giggled and blushed, thinking that he tumbled over his words.¨im klovn, but you can call me klove¨she smiled.
when he saw her beautiful smile, he smilled back and shortly after he was on the ground ¨OUF!¨ he grunted.
she laughed and giggled as she saw it all roll in slow motion, the smile, the paw lifting in an awkward way, the root, the miss step, falling forward and lastly the butt in the air. (picture this position of one of my drawings XD [link] )
he smiled and laughed along with her ¨hehehe , dident see the root there¨he got up and smiled silly.
there ya go :3
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thank you very much :3
i hope i win him ^^
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(Psst, my story is written form his point of view^^)
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haha! and so she is back!(thats me) with a story to tell, here goes!
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It's so soft...I feel, so warm...
"You have to go now," She said softly.
"Why?" I asked.
"You must go out there, and help the world, meet other beings, learn and grow," She replied.
It's so dark down here, in the heart of the earth, but so warm and safe.
"You'll be alright," She reassured him.
"Because you will always be with me, right?" I asked.
"Right."
I was born in this darkness, all I saw was darkness, safe darkness.
I felt her move, "Mother?" She didnt reply.
"Spixen," She suddenly said, "It's time."
I felt her muzzle kiss my forehead, "I love you." I heard her whisper.
"Mother...I, love you too."
I felt myself suddenly being surrounded by compressed air, and a rubbery floor replaced the hard rocky ground I knew. Then, I started to float up, I felt my feet leave the ground. Up, up, up, I was scared going upward. Then again, the darkness made it hard to tell if I was moving at all.
Suddenly I felt a wind rush, and moved me back and forth, and in zig-zag motions. I gasped and let out a yelp. I looked upward, I still cant see a thing! Suddenly the capsule I was in slamed against something, but it kept pushing upward, instead of stoping. I was squished and squashed up against the mud. Then, its pushing birst through! Another tunnel up, but this time i saw shimering brightness up above me....could it be? the "up"?
I reached it a little too soon, the light burned my eyes! I shut my eyes for a little while, then looked again, mother had taught me most things about "up". And in the light I reliazed I was in a bubble! Floating through liquid, and colorful animals swam around me, so beautiful...
I kept rising, the water ended and I kept going up into the air. I saw the horizon, blown away by its beauty. POP! I fell, a scream of exciment and fear escaped my lungs.
SPLASH! I dont know how I made it to shore, I guess the fear of drowning. I shook off the water, It smelled wonderfull, and the sights where just as good. I looked at the world ahead of me, and back to the depts of the earth under the water... home. Mother was right, It was time.
I am ready.
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Read the Description on this one
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I know that!^^ 
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No
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thank you!^^ i'll write it a little later, you havent heard the last of me! mwahahahaha!
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Could we post it as a story...mine's kinda long.
If not, I could certienly shorten it
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Preferably in a comment here
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Here we go... sorry for taking up so much room
There are people in this world who are different. We don't ask to be different, we just are…and for our misfortune, of being different, we are thrust into the horrible hell-fires, of loneliness, of invisibility, of ignorance, or solitude.
Believe me, if we could give up or differences, in any way, shape or form, we would. With out a second’s thought, we would leave our differences behind in hell, to toil on their own, without us.
What is Heartache?
To you, it may be that fact that you couldn’t go to your best friend’s house, or that your boyfriend dumped you, or you got chocolate ice cream instead of vanilla. But to me, Heartache is something much stronger, something much harsher, something a thousand times more deadly.
Heartache is having that feeling of anticipation, when you think your life is changing
Heartache is trying to be a good friend, when all you want to do is sit and cry
Heartache is the world, coming crashing down on your shoulders
Heartache is wanting so desperately, something you know you can never have
Heartache is forcing your body to play dead, when you want to feel so alive
Heartache is wanting somebody, when you know she belongs to another
Heartache is dreaming that you are someone else, when you know you could never be
Heartache is having to scream and curse the world, but you are mute
Heartache is wanting the blind to see
Heartache is wishing the deaf could hear
Life’s beautiful symphony orchestras
Smile, so you mask the tears behind dead eyes
Laugh, so you lock away the hurt, so only you know its there
Fake your joy, so that everyone else is convinced of your lies…
But enough of that young pup, you came here to know about me…not here me rabble on about useless information, that you more than likely do not understand. My story is short, but not at all sweet. My life is like a lemonade with a bowlful of too much sugar, that makes you purse your lips as the sting of the vile bitterness stings your delicate taste buds.
My birth was a mistake, I was made from rape, hatred and revenge. My father was a warlord, different as well, my mother was not, just a simple commoner who had chosen the wrong decision at the wrong time. You, young pup, know not what it feels like to know that you trapped your own mother in a swirling darkness of her own personal hell, gradually leading her to her death, one step at a time.
With her gone, my father stepped in almost immediately, training me tirelessly. Over the years my paws ran crimson with the fresh blood I had spilt at my father’s bidding. The memory of my mother, and her beliefs, gradually bled from my memory.
But Memento…dearest Memento. Though half-dead herself, she still kept on the legacy, and her morals alive within herself, she reminded me so much of mother, and rekindled the dying flame within me. The flame of justice, right, liberty and peace.
And here I am now, young pup, with a home, a family, a mate. But still on the run, and always on the run. Never resting, never stopping, endlessly moving, like fire.
My name you ask, my name is Venndettan. Now flee young pup, flee like my sin-ridden father is at your heels. Flee and never look back.
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This is so beautiful... Amazing. I know you're gonna win this.
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Thanks
I'm glad it moved you
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If she will win she will have two awesome chirimos for cool cub
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Really
I hope I win him too!
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This is beautiful and so sad 
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Thank you
I really put some thought into it
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oh...okay...I'll be taking up quite a bit of room then
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“My earliest memory was of fire, when I opened my eyes I was staring at majestic orange flames climbing up to the sky to see which one could go the highest. My second earliest memory is or ice, the snow was cold on my new born paws and the icicles complimented the sunlight that shone through them. Many years have gone by, more than any creature including me could ever count. I’m still alive, and I still remember how I came into being. A tribe of humans who seemed to enjoy killing animals and painting each other with the blood brought me into being. I now know it was by a strange ceremony, they had been begging the fox spirits for help and thus I was created. But I was no help, I didn’t even know what I was, I only knew I was called “Selvian”, how could I save them from the coming winter? So they chased me out. I lived in fear of the humans until their race was wiped out, the spirits and animals rule now. Presently I have made the decision to move…My glacier is melting and if I want to survive I must find a new home. I fear the adventure ahead.”
So er summary type thing in his point of view XD I hope it made sense! By the way Selvian(Sill-v-an)
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Congradulations on your win
I'm kinda sad that I didn't get him...but I'm sure he'll have a great home with you
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Thank you :3 I know everyone tried so hard it was really wonderful x3 You have some of the best ideas! So keep working hard yah? Hehe thanks ^^
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Your quite welcome
Thanks, but I can see why you won him!
I will
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^_^ Yay I look forward to it!
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Congratulations
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OoO (My face)
Wow! I really thought I wasnt going to win @.@ I did?!
Thank you!
He'll finish off our family ^^
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ThankyousomuchIloveyoulotsifyoucanevenre adthis!
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this chirimo was born different from others.
he was unlike others, he had no wings, no horns, no real fins but instead, poisoned spines. as he grew he became more full of self-confidence. he knew to controll himself from hurting others. no metter how much other chirimos bother him. his past was torture from him, constant torment. it was also scary for him. the poison in his spines is very deadly. if another chirimo tried to touch him they'd fall instantly. it resulted in hiding, and now a peaceful and legendary beast walks the planet. deadly to touch but beautiful
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Unfortunately I already have two,but he is beautiful!
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So Pretty! Alright I'll try:
He was born different from other chimiro's due to his odd colorations and wings. Even though he looked different he felt no different from the others. Born off the shore of a little lake in the contry side he didn't see all the brightly colored chimimo of the cities and of other towns. He was raised as a modest little critter who tried to be bright on everything he saw. He never harmed another creature because of how he was picked on as a cub. Until one day another bright chirimo wandered gracefully into the village he lived in. With her a cub of extrodinary colors different from the plains he grew up around. He talked with the adult and learned of others like them and he felt happier than ever he fell in love with the green Chirimo named meika and adopted her cub like it was his own and got along with it's bio father as well. His name was Ademar.
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He is soooo incredibly beautiful! I hope people will fight with beak and claws to get this adoreable little fellah and do their best to get him >w<
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do we put the story here on the comments?
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