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ADreamyHead0 — Flash Comic: Robot Astron II
Published: 2012-04-20 13:35:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2064; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 5
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READ BEFORE YOU WRITE A COMMENTTHE ENGLISH IN THIS COMIC IS NOT VERY PROFFESIONAL THAT IS IT MIGHT NOT BE PROPER IN FEW PLACES
PLEASE DO NOT SEND ANY ABUSE REGARDING IT AND IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT NO ONE IS STOPING YOU FROM NOT READING IT
AND ALSO IF YOU GOT ANY PROBLEM IN NEXT AND PREVIOUS BUTTON THEN TRY RELOADING IT...
The II part of Comic Robot Astron...
Argh!!! I just made...another failed comic ;0;
The movie part is toooo FAST! you have to be alert mind if you want to catch up~
or you have to reload or wait for it to finish then hit the prev button LOL (see?..a failed comic T^T)
the prev button is pretty trouble maker in some places as it'll play the music double time....
But in anyways being a newbie in flash and making these childish craps for experiments and getting experience but still this is so dearie to me
btw..*ahem*..oh!look! it seems like the people sent to find Astron found them! what will happen you will find in the next part (i hope i can fit rest of the story in the next part to make it final ;A; )
I Part [link]
Final Part [link]
its funny i just noticed when i uploaded it that even while loading it shows 100% but i won't repair that cuz i am too lazy for this -_-
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Comments: 16
This sounds like a quite interesting story, and I think you did a rather good job with the animation too. I do have to say that the whole story kept going really fast, and I had some trouble catching up all the text that kept going too fast for me to read. I had to return back a few times just to catch up what was going on. But that aside, I think you did a good job with this, and the story really sounds compelling. I might just have to follow this further to see how it turns out.
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Hey! thanx for reading
And for the text i know 
btw the next part is out now! 
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Good story line, and I actually don't think it's a failed comic at all. I would suggest that you make the next and previous buttons a little clearer, even just adding an arrow or something would make it much easier to understand. The english was actually okay, the only thing I had a problem with was that in some places the dialogue ran outside of the screen so you could only read half of what they were saying.
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Thanx for watching! 
and about the dialogues..well 
well i don't think that it is good to make prev button because it makes the music play double times lol, but okay i'll make an arrow to make it more clearer 
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i wish someone could make me cartoon... but still awesome!
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hehe ^^ u'll know~
btw thanx for reading!
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ur welcome! keep posting those comics those are awesome!
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