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Dont bag the name! ROFLthis took way too long....
ne ways let me kno wat u think this is my first attempt at a big vector piece... so be nice...
Original image from: [link]
--Re-posted because i rooted up the other submition...
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Comments: 15
ChewedKandi [2005-05-13 23:23:26 +0000 UTC]
Hi - I am in your workgroup and I thought I would come along and check out your gallery!
This piece stuck out the most to me.
I kind of like the fact that the outline of the whole piece is smooth and curved - yet the shading and detail is choppy. I love the hand detail as well - nice one!
I think the only advice I could offer is to maybe put a sort of an obvious outline around the underwear - white background and white underwear - it's hard to make it out and maybe it would bring out her curves more yanno?
Anyway - off to check out the rest of your gallery
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AdRoiT-Designs In reply to ChewedKandi [2005-05-14 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]
Yea this was my first eva vector, i hate it, but everyone had to start somewhere. This is a great comment, most people just say i like it or i dont and tend not to give critique, i completly agree with u on all hat u have said, but time is a luxury that i just dont have at the moment... but i can assure u my next human vector piece will be much better! It has taken me around 15hours so far and i am only 3/4 of the way thru.
Thanks again!
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girunmasked [2005-01-02 05:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, (Is a fan of Vector Art anyway, so I <3 it.)
I was VERY close to criticizing you horribly for her left arm, but then I looked at the original. You did a very GREAT job at portraying her! Its all the way down to the cenimeter in its greatness. I love how you kept this image rough instead of smooth, it creates a really cool effect.
Anyway, enough of my jabbering, it all means = Awesome job, I wish I looked like her ;__;.
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AdRoiT-Designs In reply to girunmasked [2005-01-07 08:11:04 +0000 UTC]
yer i wasnt really happy with this, the effect i was going for didnt really work, but hey it was my first real human vector so it was a start... i am kinda embarrased by this one to tell the truth... Thank you for the kind comments tho.
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skipgamer [2004-11-03 10:40:41 +0000 UTC]
I like the style as it is man, unique.... The randomness of the edges makes it look like it was done with a filter..... yea, reminds me of the trace option in Flash! Anyway, I like it as it is.... except for perhaps the stomach, it looks a little to thin. Anyway, well done! Keep it up!
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AdRoiT-Designs In reply to skipgamer [2004-11-04 04:21:53 +0000 UTC]
yer i was afraid if i did it too smooth it would just look like a generic effect or sumthin. thanks for the comment!!
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stunt [2004-11-02 14:13:53 +0000 UTC]
not a bad effort for first attempt! i think you either need to go completely soft or completely sharp in your styles, smoothen it out a litttle and it will have a much better softness to it..
i like gion sharp but on a good loooking girl it doesnt really fit.
good luck
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AdRoiT-Designs In reply to stunt [2004-11-03 04:48:43 +0000 UTC]
yer tru thanks for the good advice!
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brad-t [2004-10-28 15:04:15 +0000 UTC]
It is difficult for me to judge this.... I've never done a vector. This looks good in my opinion. Did you see how she looks on a dark background?
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AdRoiT-Designs In reply to brad-t [2004-10-30 01:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Nah i havent really done much since i finished it, i am really quite sick of it but i will experiment with different backgrounds and i think i am going to try and make a wallpaper out of it... just CBF tho
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x-xForGoTTeNx-x [2004-10-28 14:54:30 +0000 UTC]
not bad, but I still think things should look smoother. unless this was your intention?
I also think you did a very good job at the shapes: arms, breasts, face, fingers
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AdRoiT-Designs In reply to x-xForGoTTeNx-x [2004-10-30 01:21:17 +0000 UTC]
Y thanks, yer i agree with the whole looking smoother comment, but as i said b4 this is my first attempt at this kinda vector and im sure i will iron out those creases with time.
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x-xForGoTTeNx-x In reply to AdRoiT-Designs [2004-10-30 10:52:55 +0000 UTC]
I bet once you get the hang of it that you will love making vectors
keep trying (unless you feel like doing other stuff hehe)
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