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Published: 2006-10-23 04:32:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1062; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 8
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Render : =Angelus-HellionHope you all enjoy my first deviation.
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's are all appreciated.Enjoy!
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thts sweet... i wish i was good with c4d renders =[
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Umm.. O...m..g how the hell did you do that =O
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While I'm not much of an artist myself when it comes to this style of art, I'll have a go, still.
The first thing I noticed, was the overall feel of the picture. Instead of a 'hiding place', it felt like an outburst. Not sure if this is trying to convey a message, but I don't feel it's working.
The second thing was the overall distortion on the render. I honestly think it's a shame to see that, since it ruins the clean feel renders usually have t them. Maybe try to at least leave some places untouched?
Another point is the lines on the left. Instead of those, I think this render could've done with some more straight vector shapes. It'd certainly enhance the overall feel, next to being a nice addition to the render.
Finally, on the right, there's a low-oopacity overlay of another render. Either have it not overlap the original render, or lose it completely, since as it is, it doesn't add to the pice, but rather make it look a bit sloppy.
Well, that's about it from me. Please note I'm not trying to take a stab at your work, I'm merely trying to assist you in becoming a better artist. I hope it was of help.
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I know I know, constructive criticism 
I understand this sorta stuff. I dont have very good monitor, it's quite old, and my graphics card isn't the best either. So I might have missed the opacity layer you're talking about. But again, this comment was very informitive and I thank you!
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Awesome effects, very great. I love the colors and the flow
Really great
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you dont need those random lines. and you should have a focal point. render is quite nice tho.
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Render is not mine, I think I have a focal point, the lines add to it... maybe not.... my personal opinion though. Thanks for the comment though!!!!
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Mucho appreciated!!!!!! Thank you!
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Good pic
I like the complex style and the colors
Nice work
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Thanks, everything is greatly appreciated!!
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Lovely work, I really like the colours and the post-render additions you've made. The misty light in particular is very nice. If I had a crit, it would be that the font is perhaps not the most suitable, because the serifs don't fit in with the modern style of your work. The other thing that doesn't work as well is the pink section at the to the upper left. Compared to the rest of the render, it appears too flat and strangely stretched. However, the contrast of colours and shapes in the rest of the piece are really good
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Thanks for the suggestions, I had no idea what text to use, or where to put it. Your advice is greatly appreciated!
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comment is appreciated. Thanks!
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Oh yeah normal comment:
it loooks good. maby get a better glow and more detail about lighting should be nice 
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