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ArtlessHmmmm [2008-04-19 13:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant lighting and angle. even the flowers vibrant colour is reflected by her left eye. The colour of the jumper works allthough the position of it seems a little lumpy/large/frumpy/in the way. The over all effect of the colorus and composition is fairly high impact yet retaining an air of mystery and subtleness created by teh shadows! Brilliant!
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aeravi In reply to ArtlessHmmmm [2008-04-20 06:37:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the thorough feedback!
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aeravi In reply to ratulangi [2007-10-31 03:36:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you
is there anything you don't like about this image?
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pl101 [2007-10-19 21:12:47 +0000 UTC]
For me its what isn't in the picture that is so striking. The lighting pulls my eyes to her profile. The eyes and lips - slightly open, searching - give a feeling of intensity - a moment. What is she looking at, what is she feeling - thats where we (I) the viewer comes in to write the story. Is she alone, lost in thought, looking at a beautiful sky to match the light. Is she happy, wistful for things that have passed or things soon to be. Is she looking at a lover, soon to be kissed - or the lover gone and she is left with a memory. This is why I am drawn in - taking the beauty of what is presented and feeling it through my own experience.
Eh hem... in other words - dude, good pic
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aeravi In reply to pl101 [2007-10-20 04:29:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the intensely thoughtful and detailed critique!!
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Petitemuse [2007-09-25 04:12:13 +0000 UTC]
Peaceful, beautiful and yellow! Awesome masterpiece
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aeravi In reply to CanadianRocker [2007-09-17 16:51:56 +0000 UTC]
helps to have such a lovely model!!
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IHanakoI [2007-07-06 11:53:54 +0000 UTC]
this shot is great
i love that contrast between the face and the yellow petals
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JacquiJax [2007-06-24 15:30:42 +0000 UTC]
well done hon!! love the light on just one side of the face.. looks really nice
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maskedpianist [2007-06-20 20:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Ooh! This picture has really good shadows! Awesome job!
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nyankorita [2007-06-18 09:38:14 +0000 UTC]
something about that dramatic chiaroscuro on her face, that contemplative expression, and the perfect balance between the crisp and the blurry... really draws me in. It's like I'm captured in this quiet moment.
O_____O I really like this one.
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aeravi In reply to nyankorita [2007-06-18 10:17:50 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the advanced critique!! really appreciated
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nyankorita In reply to aeravi [2007-06-18 12:53:39 +0000 UTC]
you asked for it ;'] btw, how does one set up the comments so that it says "advanced critique encouraged" as it does on yours? is that just for subscribers?
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aeravi In reply to nyankorita [2007-06-18 13:53:14 +0000 UTC]
when you're submitting the work, i think it's the last box near the bottom...
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nyankorita In reply to aeravi [2007-06-18 21:50:34 +0000 UTC]
huh. guess I never noticed it >_> thanks!
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aeravi In reply to nyankorita [2007-06-18 23:10:46 +0000 UTC]
refridgerator blindness... a malady i constantly suffer from.
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djberry [2007-06-17 18:35:45 +0000 UTC]
Nice shot! Love the profile in stark contrast with the flowers.
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TreLore In reply to aeravi [2007-06-18 03:36:10 +0000 UTC]
Standing Ovation, yelling more more
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fahap [2007-06-17 10:46:28 +0000 UTC]
wow i so wish i lived some place near u, i so love ur shoots, would of loved to have learned from u in the field and do a shoot along with u,
anyways love the lighting of this shot as usual, specially the expressions and the framing
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