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Nick's Were Form... c:anatomy critique plz? DD:
PS. Yes..this was originally my character sunny....but i just decided to make it nick's were form cause...i didnt want to create another werewolf DDX
PSS. Should i keep this shading style for good?? OO:
Nick and sumit (c) me
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I was told you needed crits? 
For one, I'm a little harsh, sorry. But I will say this is really good already. It's kinda hard for me to find too much wrong with this.
Most of what I see wrong is around the head and paws. The teeth are not accurate, they are just a bit too much... Single triangles. Making the back ones look like molars would help. Here's a good ref: [link]
The tusks are too far forward to be the bottom canines too, I would move them back and curve them a bit more to make them look more like overlarge canines than sabers.
The fur detail is a little jagged in places. That's not bad considering how fierce this looks, but I would recommend that it was a bit smoother, some areas clumping together?
When a wolf snarls the skin in pulled toward the eyes, or at least looks like it. I think in here it's pulling to much to the side and the fold lines are too angular. [link] ).jpg
Smoother lines leading to under the eyes would suit better.
If you're going for half wolf leg-arm there, then it's okay, but the upperarm is too wide for the forearm either way. The widest part of the forearm is the widest part of the entire arm. I would, just to make it look more like a human arm, lengthen the upper arm as well.
This is just a small quibble, but as the wolf has a large head and heavy shoulders, holding his arms under him like that would put a lot of pressure on his wrist and probably cause him a good deal of pain to stay like that for too long. Holding the hands a bit farther apart would balance the weight better.
It would probably be more comfortable if he was resting that left knee on the ground or if he had that knee raised high, supporting more of that foot. On the line on the foot, the toes all look the same size, but the middle two should be larger and a bit more forward than the two on the side. [link]
My last issues are the amount of little detail lines on the chest and side. I really can't see what they're are defining and you might be better with less lines. But I personally tend to keep things simple, so that is a personal preference.
The ears are very inaccurate. They shouldn't have that ribbing in their ears like a bat. It should have a slight rim on the edges and fur inside: [link]
Small issues are the size of the tail, I would make it large and bristling, as right now it is contradicting his snarling face. It's calm, but he's angry.
Also, too many belt loops.
Please don't get me wrong, I think this is great! I like it! I really had to work to find these things. Keep up the good work!
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Mo gives this critique and
EPIC BOO!!!!!!!!!!
>:C its a werewolf not a dog if she wants the fangs to be super long and its ears can be short with no fur and its a werewolf not wolf so its gonna hve hand like paws >:C
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Um, she asked for critique okay? So I gave it. I say what I think is wrong if she wants the ears short they can be short, I was just giving my OPINION on what was wrong.
Also I KNOW it's a werewolf, that's why I sent pictures of WOLVES.
I don't get why you're mad at me. She thanked my nicely and went on her way. If she had an issue, she could tell me.
I give long critiques and I tell what *I* think is wrong just like I was given and gave while in two art classes at once doing multimedia paintings on a large scale.
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thank you! you really helped me out alot ^^ ill take this into consideration next time i draw him :3
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You're very welcome! :3
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*Gasp*
hehe Love, love, LOVE it
Hmmm, I, myself am not very good with critique, but I can get someone who is good. o:
And btw, yes, keep this shading style- but for menacing pictures, because it works amazingly with this image.
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wewt
thank you sixxxx <33 i'll be sure to do that >:U
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XD It's not a problem! ;D Btw, my friend can either be harsh or gentle- you need to let her know what sort of critique you want.
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Oh shi- I forgot to tell her it was a fox. . . XD Sorry!
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oh gee i thought it was sunny. O_O well nick is a fox and he'd have to be a werefox..unless he's a fulf. but good job. his front paws seem webed...i think its just me X3
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yeah xD hes still a fox...
thanks <3
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Wow I really like this shading <3
I can never understand how my style could beat this Nai, I just can't. You can do so much more than I can, we both know it. This is AMAZING. End of story.
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well....it just does >:C
and thank you <3
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This is effing Win. I came a little.
And yeh. Keep the shading cause it looks extremely realistic.
So...much...detail.....fajf;owehgnjerdnvjfhg;ajwef lol
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gfdgbfgas -melts-
thanksss <33
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HES ALL
OHHAITHURRR
shading=yus, its win
HURR I WATCHED YOU DOODLE THIS. C:<
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HURR INDEED YOU DID
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