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astarayel [2013-04-13 10:38:09 +0000 UTC]

Hello there!

I figured it would be way more useful for me to comment on the deviation itself, rather than put my thoughts into the note. You are really well on your way here. The anatomy is spot-on (which is incredible, considering it's such a difficult perspective to draw). I really like this, and with a bit more work, it'll go from being good to great!

The biggest thing I notice is that while all the forms and general shading are there, for realism you're going to need some more blending to make everything gel together. For the skin, the shadows are great, but could be blended into skin tone a bit more--and don't be afraid to mix some crazy colors in there, like purples and blues! I would also recommend using a combination of a textured/"skin" brush, an airbrush, and a hard round for those details. It takes some experimenting, but those three brushes are generally what I use to paint skin. With the hair, there could also be a bit more definition and texture--some of those individual strands want to be highlighted! The jacket is coming along really well--I'm not sure what the material is, so it could be less shiny if it's something like cotton, but if not, just ignore that

Overall, you've got a very beautiful image going here (and it helps to have a great model, right? ), and I can't wait to see how it looks once you've worked on more of the details! It's going to take a lot of time, patience, and probably wanting to bang your head against a wall, especially when you start putting in smaller details, but once you get the hang of that, it's going to be fun. I promise! Keep up the great work, and let me know if you have more questions or if something here doesn't make any sense!

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MiChanKoshka [2013-03-22 09:31:38 +0000 UTC]

Kyaa~~ this artwork is worth looking at. The details are awesome and attractive. MiChan will not doubt that this will caught a lot of attentions~!!


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