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Afina79 — Post Work? Need Input
Published: 2009-06-23 18:28:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 3345; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Okay, well I just rendered this in Studio. I know it needs some work but I am not sure if I should bother. It really isn't the type of art I am known for. I like it and all just wondering if people think I should go ahead and finish this with the post work and actually submit, submit this.Any input would be welcome.
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Thankies but going to try to make it better today.
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As you asked for input, let me try to give some.
Main topic: context. What is the general context? What are you intending to show with this image? What feelings did you have when creating it? Do you want to makes feel the same? Describe the image using 3 nouns (no adjectives)...
Great. We've found the context. Now we need to see if the image evokes that. Does the clothing help or hinder your purpose? Is there need of using two different textures/materials/reflections on the clothes? I liked the gloves, but somehow the top dress seemed out of place. I picture the model with a nightgown, not sure of what she is doing there, asking herself how to leave the place... Of course you may have different ideas.
Should you keep changing and postworking on this one? I don't know - it's something only you can answer. I may point this image has potential, but maybe you could focus your creative energies on a next piece... If you like what you've done, don't change it. If you don't, find the balance between 'fixing' it or 'creating' something new.
I hope this helps.
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Thanks for the input.
Actually the gloves and corset are really odd. They are the base texture set. Though I am beginning to think that the mesher did them that way since in real life most corset's don't match the gloves exactly. Gloves tend to be silk while a true boned corset that actually holds you in like that has a matte fabric to it. Silk is just to fragile. And vica-versa, heavy textiles like that are just to rigid for gloves.
Oh and general context - Doesn't have done. Actually now that I think about it, I never have done with my poser art usually until I am done with it and then I just name it what ever I feel fits when it id done. I know, bass akwards. lol
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I definitely think you should finish it up.
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hehe, how did I know you would think I needed to finish it up? ^^ :teasing:
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Aww thankies. You're right!
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I say go ahead and finish it up, though I'ld suggest for the clothes that you keep them matte instead of venial (the gloves) unless you have a program that can render them at the same level of quality as everything else in the image, other wise they just stand out from the rest of the picture.
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Yeah I was thinking that. Thank you for the input.
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