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Published: 2010-07-09 02:29:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 865; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 43
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don't get tangled up with the wrong crowd, kids. once you do, it's nearly impossible to get out.suggestions on this would be nice. think i could do a few tweaks, but can't figure out what, exactly
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This picture is really great and find his place on your artwork.
The texture is awesome and the treatment in Black and White accurate this impression. Maybe just the focus on the top is a little bit too just but while you're looking all the picture that's just a detail.
In the meanwhile, the dialog between the wood which is organic and the metal is really great : at first sight it's diffucult to separate one from each other.
Maybe even you could made the iron a little bit more clear ( in the highlights) whould change the vision given. But that's just a suggestion off course !
Nevertheless, congratulation for this shot !
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thanks for the critique
i lightened the highlights on the barbed wire, and darkened the mid-tones around it as well... hope it looks a little better
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Really great like this. I prefer this version ! You've done a great job !
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You're welcom ! Now it's part of my 
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My only suggestion is to make sure you're up to date on all your tetanus shots. Otherwise it's a cool shot. YaY for rust.
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thanks 
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It might seem so simple, but I really enjoy the vine that is caught between the barbed wires because it really does add up with the title.
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thanks 
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i'm glad you can see the difference
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oh yes the difference i s really good, i still like the original to be honest with you, but i think youve done an excellent job bringing out more detail
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.... more textures caught this morning ... i hope i'm not uploading too many
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those little things one finds and that are so meaningful...I just love it
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it's already extremely contrasted (just look at the texture on the wood 
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it's difficult, you have the original i presume.
try push one color of wire and play with niveau and contrast after.
juste suggestion *neutral*
if you want post original perhaps I can try to play with !
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already tried thaat 
i'm going to look into that... but if that doesn't work, i'm going to have to do it by hand with the burn tool
here's the original: [link] have at it
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yes it's a very hard picture to rework !
i'm just an amateur, I just try ! but thanks for autorization
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after try
red, cyan, green are present in all the piece of picture, it's the problem !
here my try but I'm not satisfied. after you watch, I'll erase file
It's seem difficult to make better of you
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thank you very much for your trust and I'm glad to share this experience
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still.... not.... following
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communication break-down. restart
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10010110001010100111 (oh noes, restart was unsuccessful and i now only speak computer languaaaage 
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i love these images ... i love your work .... damn its good
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do you think i should make the barbed wire darker, so it standz out?
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i think you should do whatever you want to do with it ... it looks fine to me already ...
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but what i want to do isn't always riiiight.... you should know by now i'm really fuckin indecisive and of COURSE really bad at judging my own work :/
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yes i know you are but everytime you get a positive reply you should be proud and think "yes i'm doing good"
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