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Description paaaage 6iiiiix. inked, then shaded with pencil rather than toning. :-D we'll just test out everything, won't we preciousssss

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io, endis, ari, gaebel (c) me; mary (c) =Caladria

story snip to follow, from "keeping up appearances" in the yet-to-be-name saga.

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But Mary didn't look amused. She didn't look amused at all. Even
if Mr. Endis had been named after a flower, so what? She could
spot a childish attempt to insult someone from 20 miles away and
she didn't like it one bit.

"Excuse me," she said, her eyes very critical, now, of the pretty
blond elf who was trying to put on a show of seriousness. She
walked the rest of the way down the stairs to stand beside Endis
and faced his tormentor, "But I can't let you talk to my Dad that
way. This man has helped many people, cared for them, protected
them, when they didn't have anyone else to rely on. And he's willingly
hurt himself to do it. He's about one of the most selfless people I know
and I want to be LIKE him when I grow up. My name is Mary, and it
means the 'bitterness of the Sea'. Do you want to say something funny
about my name too?"

Mary knew she shouldn't get involved in Adult Things, but, by god,
after everything that Mr. Endis was going through, had gone through
just on her account alone, he didn't need some pretty elf prince
looking down on him and making fun of him. Mary's blue eyes were
challenging. She might get yelled at for this, and she was ready for it,
but at least she had said her piece to support her 'dad.'

Ionorin watched Mary somewhat passively for a moment, his expression
inscrutable. Then he sighed somewhat sadly, if a bit dismissively.
"No," he answered. "Of course I do /not/, Miss Mary. But," he added,
turning bright blue eyes on the girl, blond brows drawn together in
earnest, "you should know whom it is you're wanting to be like. What
you say is true, your dad's people are known for these attributes,
when they can afford it. But beyond that, I would imagine he's told
you nothing about himself, what he's done. What his people-"

"SHUT YOUR DAMN MOUTH!" Endis roared finally, stepping between them,
fists clenching.

Ionorin lowered his brows and looked sidelong up at the taller man, .
"Going to hit me /again/, Seeker, in front of these children you care
for? At least have a little respect for youth if you won't for the
Lady."

"Don't you dare try to talk to Mary like that, about me! You don't
even KNOW me, but I know you, /General/. Slaughterer of families,
murderer of captured and defenseless soldiers."

"I did no such thing," Ionorin growled, now visibly nearly as pissed
as Endis was. "You and your Seeker propoganda. You sound as if you
actually /believe/ that nonsense!"

"I was THERE," Endis rebutted. "In Galaghie, in a rescue team just
minutes too late! I saw the carnage, the families murdered in the
attempt to flee. And I SAW you raise your sword to order the last
round of arrows that killed the last of the victims, you COWARD, you
MURderer!"

Ionorin was quiet for a moment, seething with his eyes. "Impossible,"
he said presently, having composed himself. His voice was barely
above a whisper in his drive to remain calm. "I was never in
Galaghie. You're mistaken, Seeker. In point of fact, when I heard
about Galaghie, I was in Evershale, and prepared to wheel my own
troops around to send aid, but was commanded to stand down, as there
was reportedly no one left to save. It wasn't me, Seeker. The elves
didn't massacre Galaghie. Do not forget that we were not your only
enemy, just your favorite one to blame."

Endis was quiet for a moment, thoughtful but still quite pissed. Ari
watched, tense, and Gaebel, who'd come with Mary but stayed a bit
behind when she'd made her overture, stepped over to Ari and watched
as well, wide-eyed. Of course, they'd just been talking about how
they didn't know much about Endis, when they were trying to figure out
how to help him. The boy supposed it was possible... and if something
so awful had happened - General, carnage? must have meant war of some
sort - who wouldn't have wanted to keep it secret and try to forget
about it, but... Endis? A soldier? He didn't even carry a sword or
bow! He didn't even like to fight at all, didn't ever spar with men
in the caravan or even roughhouse with older caravan boys looking to
him for good-natured tussling. It was hard to believe he might have
been fighting in a war when right now he seemed to more match the
origin of his name. But Endis wasn't denying it either.

As Endis had not yet responded, Ari cleared her throat. "Clearly,"
she said quietly, "There has been quite a misunderstanding here."

"Clearly," Ionorin agreed. "Obviously-"

"Please be quiet, your Highness."

Ionorin blinked, then snapped his mouth shut, smiling sheepishly and
nodding an obvious 'yes, of course, whatever was I thinking.'

"Now, if you two can behave for a few moments, I believe Mary and
Gaebel and I need to have a secret conference to figure out what we
believe to be true and what we feel to be complete nonsense. We may
be asking you questions, but I want NO TALKING until such time as
questions are asked."

Ionorin pulled his brows together in some distress, but didn't say anything.

"Don't worry, I will try to present both of your cases fairly, Prince."

Ionorin winced. "Please don't-"

"Shut your-"

"Endis!" Ari warned.

"Quite, Seeker!" Ionorin agreed wholeheartedly.

"Don't call me that!"

"ENOUGH."

Both of the men looked at her, mouths open in whatever they'd been
ready to say to each other. Simultaneously, they snapped them shut
again and hmpfed loudly.

"Now, do you promise not to behave like men while we are talking? You
first." She nodded to Ionorin.

"Of course, you have my word." Endis rolled his eyes.

"Endis?"

"What do you think?" he said, obviously still highly disgruntled.

Ari raised a brow. "I /think/ that if you don't promise not to hit
him again, I shall practice magic on you, which may or may not end
well for you."

Endis quirked a lip at that and looked more or less afraid for his
life. He swallowed and said, "Yes, I solemnly swear that I will not
hit or swear at the pretty elf boy, even if he really really deserves
it."

Ari smiled forcedly. "Very well," she said, turning to Mary and
Gaebel. "Why don't I let you in on what's happened just before you
came down, shall I? Over here, where the smell of testosterone isn't
so strong." She gestured to a table.
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Comments: 10

Caladria [2005-10-15 19:20:33 +0000 UTC]

As I mentioned profusely the other day, this is awesome! You have gone beyond "getting the hang of this manga thing" and straight into "woa!". All of the angles, the successful use of emotional conventions and such good humor! "Pay attention stupid elf!" LOL! I LOVE that picture of Endis carrying Io over his shoulder! LOL. They look so adorable together for some reason. *coughhack* "It's brig" "yeah whatever" "MOVING ON!" Bwahahaha

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agelade In reply to Caladria [2005-10-17 13:48:02 +0000 UTC]

there's some yaoi-tastic suggestion in the next page, lol. i just can't help it! they're SO never getting it on, and Endis, at least, is completely STRAIGHT. (heh, ok, io is too, but he's so pretty! it's hard to believe he hasn't had /some/ experimentation, you know, down in the trenches with other elfy soldiers, no women for miles...) but i just can't help giving fan-girls some fodder. but yeah, this page - io over endis' shoulder. i was hoping to offset a /little/ the "omg it's so obvious they're together!"-ness, but i think boys blush BOTH when they're mortified at a suggestion like that or sorta happy about it. so i think having io be embarassed failed, lol. they do look cute together - i think if the war had never happened and if they'd had any reason to ever meet, they could have been pretty good friends. they're of a like mind about a lot of stuff, including but not limited to: the superiority of females, the virtue of hard work, and the morality of being properly dressed and groomed when out of chambers. and endis could rib io when io's drinking over some girl, and io could elbow endis when he's goofily watching some girl but too shy to say anything. (and then they could decide to give up on girls altogether and just make out with each other! oh wait, NOOO! haha.)

oh, and i'm glad you liked the humour. i suck at making things funny, lol.

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Caladria In reply to agelade [2005-10-17 17:24:58 +0000 UTC]

LOL. You know, that's true; they do have a lot in common with personal tastes...
And yes, heh, down in the trenches with other pretty elfy boys and no women in sight.

Wait, no women in sight??? WTE kind of elves are these? There are lots of elven chick warriors!

Oh...maybe they're getting it on with each other. I'll have to ask Celwyn about that...hehehehe

And yay for fan service!

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agelade In reply to Caladria [2005-10-17 17:43:52 +0000 UTC]

what, the elven chicks getting it on with each other?! WHERE?! now i must draw elven chick getting it on prons.

but yeah, io's from a men-fight, women-support sorta situation. endis' people are a little more advanced, in that they have women Seekers who fight and do the same sort of work as men Seekers, but they still have honored women who sit at home and take care of the kids and do the house work and manage the money. but for both of these societies, women who take care of the house are precious precious creatures and are fairly revered (unlike here, where a stay-at-home mom is rarely praised for the huge job she does every day without a vacation). In Endis' society, Mannor Women and children under five are the only people allowed to wear their hair down. Everyone else has to have it tied back. Io's not averse to women fighting - he does believe they are strong capable people, it's just not done in his society. They're fairly peaceful by nature, so it's like, "who should we make go to war? Oh, let's not send the women, they're too important. Let's send the men, we can always make more." They didn't even really train men for war either; Io was supposed to be a musician, lol. He was very happily surprised to find women not only IN the mithril host, but commanding it as well; it cemented his pretty much permanent amazement at the female gender.

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Caladria In reply to agelade [2005-10-17 18:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. thank you for those lovely explanations. I wonder If Endis, upon giving Mary the talk, will urge her to wear her hair up since she's, like, older than 5 and she's not a stay-at-home-mom. hehehe Man I can't wait for The Talk.

Oh, and I like the idea that men are sent to war because they are expendable. They so are.

....

Except for Scott. I'm selfishly glad he'd NEVER pass the physical to be in the military...

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agelade In reply to Caladria [2005-10-17 18:34:55 +0000 UTC]

dude, i'm selfishly glad most of my friends wouldn't pass the physical. and i'm gladder as they and I age, b/c we'll escape the draft if they ever use it again. (it is NOT dismantled, they just never use it.) i myself am allergic to wool (used in lots of military gear), lactose intolerant, and have asthma, which is the kicker. if the first two didn't keep me out (i've had varying info on this: one person said that providing for all the various allergies to common things was too much of a hassle for the military and they'd just reject me, someone else said that they'd accept me but never send me to a place where they'd have to drop different rations for me than for everyone else, and yet another person said i'd just have to suck it up), i'm sure the fact that i could never pass the physical without passing out would keep me from harm's way.

but yeah, endis isn't the sort to press his less important cultural things on other people. just, no boys and girls sleeping together, and that's about it. he might suggest it, the way my dad suggested thing to me: "do you... *blushblush* think your hair might look better... *blush* up?" that talk is gonna be so hilarious.

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animegher [2005-10-13 20:40:21 +0000 UTC]

nyahahah our lil human is surprisingly more punk than one would first expect, i like his snap-back remarks. theres a nice exchange going on between the both of them.... the flow was lil bit hard until i realized i was trying to go right-to-left instead of the otherway around damn you japanese manga

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agelade In reply to animegher [2005-10-13 20:53:32 +0000 UTC]

lol damn japanese manga!! yeah, i think it'd be hard to follow backwards. anyway yeah, endis is normally sorta stoic, but this elf brings out all the snappish meanness in him. poor io. it's not his fault he wears a pretty skirt to protect his manly parts.

IO: It's BRIG!

whatever man.

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Indefatigable42 [2005-10-11 02:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Hahah. Promise not to act like men. ^__^

I'll read this again when I'm less ill and weird-feeling. Love the who's-telling-this-story comic, though.

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agelade In reply to Indefatigable42 [2005-10-11 13:14:46 +0000 UTC]

oooh i hope you feel better soon! yeah, this page is so busy, but i couldn't help but make fun of how randomly i'm telling the story - is it first person? is it third limited omniscient? dear god what is it?! anyway, it turned out pretty funny so i'm glad.

and yeah, ari's getting sick of men acting like men.

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