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Published: 2017-06-23 07:02:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Name: faleanaAge: 16
Gender: female
Species: necu fox
Personality: quirky and perky, very confusing, shy,
Background: her mother is Fox and her dad was a wolf. Her dad died in a car crash, her mother getting a broken arm, and faleana having some minor cuts but a dead father. She was very shy after the crash and disconnected with everyone, she deliberately avoided her friends and her grades went from A's and B's to C's and C-'s. After a month of counseling and therapy she became connected with her friends and her grades went back to normal, although she was and is afraid to ride in cars.
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Hello! I would like to give you some advice so that you may improve. While a cartoonish style is a very lovely one to have, it is still a good idea to have slightly more accurate anatomy. With that, I suggest broadening the shoulders so that they are twice the width of the head. Also, do not be afraid to add more body to the hair; go nuts! The same goes for the fur on the ears and tail. Furthermore, if the neck could be just slightly wider, that would improve it a but more as well. I have one last bit if friendly advice, now; guidlines are your friend. Try sketching out a witeframe using a reference of one. Y'know, with the circles and stuff. It really helps! I do like the color palette, though, because it does suite the character's personality well. The face is fairly proportioned, and I do love hiw well-developed she is. I hope that this helped in any way! -Rose
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I thank you for the advice rose but I would like to explain something's. The reason the neck is so thin is because I want an anime but cartoonie style and I draw the guide lines and I on the app that I draw on I can't use a reference. Once again thank you for the advice I will try my best to improve. -coco
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You're welcome, and I hope to see more of your work soon. I do like your style, by the way. Keep on drawing! -Rose
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