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“Come on! Wake up Ames!” I pleaded. She just had to wake up. One laser wasn’t enough to take Amy Rose out. Yet no matter how many times he jerked her feeble form, she wouldn’t move or respond.Her body was getting colder and colder by the second. He swore under his breath as pearly tears escaped his eyes. Yes this was real. This was real, bitter, cold reality. The once lively rose had withered for good this time.
The blue hedgehog filled with remorse touched her face which was now battered with blood yet to him she looked pleasant as ever. Old emotions started bubbling inside him and he gave away to despair.
"If only I had pushed her aside…she always gets in the way…why the hell did she worry so much for my sake?!…I should have been there for her like she was always there for me…I should have told her how I really fel..."
However his thoughts were broken by cracking laughter. Immediately the marine hedgehog’s cracked knuckles tightened as adrenaline pumped through his veins. Letting go of the fallen rose he eyed his enemy mercilessly. And all that echoed in his mind was murder!
But fate was against him today for not far away the police automobiles paced closer. Their alarms cut through the grave silence. He wouldn’t be able to make it alive if he stayed any longer. That’s the reason she gave up her life wasn’t it? She wanted him to live. It was hard to let her go but if he took her along there was nothing he could do for her. The paramedic squad could fix her up get her a nice funeral .She deserved more than a crappy funeral!
“hoot!” the cars got closer .Once more touching her quills he took in her fresh strawberry scent with was now marred with blood. With one last look he dashed off alone with the police hot on his tail.
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awww........now I'm being too sadistic aint I but in my eyes sonamy is a perfect couple but there will always be problems which will stop it from happening
thanks to every one who favs and comments!
sonic copyright sega,sonic team
no stealing artwork by me
oh yes the original pencil work was by
here take a look kimmykay.deviantart.com/art/Am…
and blood brushes by
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"¡Vamos! Despierta Ames ", le supliqué. Sólo tenía que despertar. Un láser no fue suficiente para llevarse a cabo Amy Rose. Sin embargo, no importa cuántas veces losacudió con fuerza su forma débil, no podría moverse o responder.
Su cuerpo estaba frío y más frío por la segunda. Maldijo en voz baja mientras las lágrimasperladas escapó de sus ojos. Si esto era real. Esto era real amargo, la realidad, el frío. El otrora vivaz rosa se había marchitado para siempre esta vez.
El erizo azul lleno de remordimiento le tocó la cara que ahora estaba golpeada con la sangre aún le parecía agradable como siempre. Antiguo emociones comenzaronburbujear en su interior y se regalaron a la desesperación.
"Si lo hubiera empujado a un lado ... ella siempre se interpone en el camino ... ¿por qué demonios no se preocupe tanto por mí?! ... Debí haber estado allí para ella como ellasiempre estuvo ahí para mí ... Yo debería haber dicho a su cómo me fel ... "
Sin embargo, sus pensamientos fueron interrumpidos por craqueo risa. Inmediatamentenudillos agrietados del erizo marino apretados como la adrenalina bombeada a través desus venas. Dejar ir de los caídos levantó él miró a su enemigo sin piedad. Y todo lo que se hizo eco en su mente era un asesinato!
Pero el destino estaba en su contra hoy no muy lejos de los coches de policía paseabancerca. Sus alarmas cortan el sepulcro silencio. No sería capaz de darle vida si se quedabamás tiempo. Esa es la razón por la que renunció a su vida ¿no? Ella quería que él viviera.Era difícil dejarla ir, pero si él la llevó consigo no había nada que pudiera hacer por ella. El equipo paramédico pudo arreglar su hasta conseguir su un buen funeral. Ella se merecía algo más que un funeral de mierda!
"Puntazo!" Los coches se acercaban. Una vez más tocar sus plumas que tomó su aromade fresa fresca con la empresa se vio empañado por la sangre. Con una última mirada que le echó a correr solo con la policía caliente en su cola.
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Hatsoonmiku [2024-01-24 19:53:09 +0000 UTC]
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TrueAnimeFan [2013-02-16 20:46:56 +0000 UTC]
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Hello! I'm a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t… " alt=" " title="TrueAnimeFan" /> ~TrueAnimeFan, and I'll be doing a critique on you! Okay, lets see..... The technique is very amazing! The blood looks very realistic. Along with the tears and shading. This doesn't even look like she chose a base at all! It's marvelous! The impact is that it really got me! It looks like she really died! Yes tell the one who made the pencil work that they did a great job! You did a better job with coloring it in and adding all the extra stuff! the only thing is to me it looks like Sonic is purple. But despite all that it is perfect! Thank you for letting me critique this art!
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aidah15 In reply to TrueAnimeFan [2013-02-17 18:24:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the lovely critique and your right, that sonic looks kinda purple, guess I should had made him more "azure" or "navy" but anyway thanks a lot for the critique, I'll definitely further work on my colours
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TrueAnimeFan In reply to aidah15 [2013-02-17 18:46:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome and you did do a great job! Keep up the good work!
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aidah15 In reply to TrueAnimeFan [2013-02-18 18:27:44 +0000 UTC]
thankyou still none the less
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aidah15 In reply to generalrusty78 [2016-12-30 15:22:33 +0000 UTC]
were they ever anything to begin with though
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generalrusty78 In reply to aidah15 [2016-12-30 15:24:30 +0000 UTC]
sonic: bigblue69-what did you say?
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LambdaRebel69 [2015-09-26 03:05:13 +0000 UTC]
So sad ;_; But it's a good story. Are you going to make a sequel? If so, make it were Sonic resurrects Amy in a morgue with the chaos emeralds. She deserves to live on with her speedy blue hero
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aidah15 In reply to LambdaRebel69 [2015-12-22 18:53:17 +0000 UTC]
probably not was just a one time colouring.
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shicaphinbella12 [2013-09-11 22:18:04 +0000 UTC]
in espanish: (im speak spanish)
"¡Vamos! Despierta Ames ", le supliqué. Sólo tenía que despertar. Un láser no fue suficiente para llevarse a cabo Amy Rose. Sin embargo, no importa cuántas veces lo sacudió con fuerza su forma débil, no podría moverse o responder.
Su cuerpo estaba frío y más frío por la segunda. Maldijo en voz baja mientras las lágrimas perladas escapó de sus ojos. Si esto era real. Esto era real amargo, la realidad, el frío. El otrora vivaz rosa se había marchitado para siempre esta vez.
El erizo azul lleno de remordimiento le tocó la cara que ahora estaba golpeada con la sangre aún le parecía agradable como siempre. Antiguo emociones comenzaron burbujear en su interior y se regalaron a la desesperación.
"Si lo hubiera empujado a un lado ... ella siempre se interpone en el camino ... ¿por qué demonios no se preocupe tanto por mí?! ... Debí haber estado allí para ella como ella siempre estuvo ahí para mí ... Yo debería haber dicho a su cómo me fel ... "
Sin embargo, sus pensamientos fueron interrumpidos por craqueo risa. Inmediatamente nudillos agrietados del erizo marino apretados como la adrenalina bombeada a través de sus venas. Dejar ir de los caídos levantó él miró a su enemigo sin piedad. Y todo lo que se hizo eco en su mente era un asesinato!
Pero el destino estaba en su contra hoy no muy lejos de los coches de policía paseaban cerca. Sus alarmas cortan el sepulcro silencio. No sería capaz de darle vida si se quedaba más tiempo. Esa es la razón por la que renunció a su vida ¿no? Ella quería que él viviera. Era difícil dejarla ir, pero si él la llevó consigo no había nada que pudiera hacer por ella. El equipo paramédico pudo arreglar su hasta conseguir su un buen funeral. Ella se merecía algo más que un funeral de mierda!
"Puntazo!" Los coches se acercaban. Una vez más tocar sus plumas que tomó su aroma de fresa fresca con la empresa se vio empañado por la sangre. Con una última mirada que le echó a correr solo con la policía caliente en su cola.
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aidah15 In reply to shicaphinbella12 [2013-11-07 20:20:24 +0000 UTC]
sorry for the extremely late reply! I used translator for this, and it wasn't as accurate as I would have though but what I did get was that you translated my story in spanish! thankyou so much! I'll put it up
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shicaphinbella12 In reply to aidah15 [2014-01-29 02:14:10 +0000 UTC]
thanks!!!! i love you, and, dont worry !!!!!
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TrueAnimeFan In reply to aidah15 [2013-02-16 20:47:21 +0000 UTC]
i finished the critique hope you like it!
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aidah15 In reply to TrueAnimeFan [2013-02-17 18:26:00 +0000 UTC]
thankyou sooo much! I really appreciate it your the first person to ever critique
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TrueAnimeFan In reply to aidah15 [2013-02-17 18:42:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! It was an honor to critique your art!
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alexandt In reply to aidah15 [2013-01-13 09:41:38 +0000 UTC]
i prefer sonic when he sleep in his bed with a trickle of drool, aahhhhhh
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xDragonMuffins [2012-07-10 11:46:01 +0000 UTC]
Sonic.....She won't wake up....Sorry....Listen and cry...--->[link]
Avater--->[link]
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aidah15 In reply to xDragonMuffins [2012-07-11 20:30:30 +0000 UTC]
aww no need to cry, this is just a fallacy she will live hopefully and thanks for the comment
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mjponso [2012-05-29 03:57:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm a big Sonamy fan, and find this very tragic.
Even to those who don't like the coupling or think Sonic doesn't care about Amy: he wouldn't be kneeling over her body, pondering how she gave her life for him, otherwise.
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aidah15 In reply to mjponso [2012-06-13 07:15:24 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your expressive comment yes you're right he does care though not as much as we exaggerate it to be but thats fandom XD
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thechaosblue [2012-05-24 00:30:12 +0000 UTC]
This is deep. Shame is that Sonic full feelings are let out this way...run Sonic, run it's what she wanted...
Really well done.
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aidah15 In reply to thechaosblue [2012-06-13 07:16:12 +0000 UTC]
thank you soo much you really interpreted this fully but the real credit for the expressions goes to the sketch artist
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thechaosblue In reply to aidah15 [2012-06-13 16:37:02 +0000 UTC]
I shall do so, and you're welcome.
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aidah15 In reply to SigmaRadec001 [2012-06-13 07:16:37 +0000 UTC]
haha its only one cannon shes alive in all the other
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x-lamour-x [2012-04-30 22:13:46 +0000 UTC]
KISS HER
She will be magical healed...
sonic you just have to grow up and kiss her....
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aidah15 In reply to x-lamour-x [2012-06-13 07:17:44 +0000 UTC]
yeah well I need a fairy tale for that to happen but this is Sega such things only happen between human princesses and hedgehogs.. XD hah see what I just did there
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