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“Come on! Wake up Ames!” I pleaded. She just had to wake up. One laser wasn’t enough to take Amy Rose out. Yet no matter how many times he jerked her feeble form, she wouldn’t move or respond.Her body was getting colder and colder by the second. He swore under his breath as pearly tears escaped his eyes. Yes this was real. This was real, bitter, cold reality. The once lively rose had withered for good this time.
The blue hedgehog filled with remorse touched her face which was now battered with blood yet to him she looked pleasant as ever. Old emotions started bubbling inside him and he gave away to despair.
"If only I had pushed her aside…she always gets in the way…why the hell did she worry so much for my sake?!…I should have been there for her like she was always there for me…I should have told her how I really fel..."
However his thoughts were broken by cracking laughter. Immediately the marine hedgehog’s cracked knuckles tightened as adrenaline pumped through his veins. Letting go of the fallen rose he eyed his enemy mercilessly. And all that echoed in his mind was murder!
But fate was against him today for not far away the police automobiles paced closer. Their alarms cut through the grave silence. He wouldn’t be able to make it alive if he stayed any longer. That’s the reason she gave up her life wasn’t it? She wanted him to live. It was hard to let her go but if he took her along there was nothing he could do for her. The paramedic squad could fix her up get her a nice funeral .She deserved more than a crappy funeral!
“hoot!” the cars got closer .Once more touching her quills he took in her fresh strawberry scent with was now marred with blood. With one last look he dashed off alone with the police hot on his tail.
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awww........now I'm being too sadistic aint I but in my eyes sonamy is a perfect couple but there will always be problems which will stop it from happening
thanks to every one who favs and comments!
sonic copyright sega,sonic team
no stealing artwork by me
oh yes the original pencil work was by
here take a look kimmykay.deviantart.com/art/Am…
and blood brushes by
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"¡Vamos! Despierta Ames ", le supliqué. Sólo tenía que despertar. Un láser no fue suficiente para llevarse a cabo Amy Rose. Sin embargo, no importa cuántas veces losacudió con fuerza su forma débil, no podría moverse o responder.
Su cuerpo estaba frío y más frío por la segunda. Maldijo en voz baja mientras las lágrimasperladas escapó de sus ojos. Si esto era real. Esto era real amargo, la realidad, el frío. El otrora vivaz rosa se había marchitado para siempre esta vez.
El erizo azul lleno de remordimiento le tocó la cara que ahora estaba golpeada con la sangre aún le parecía agradable como siempre. Antiguo emociones comenzaronburbujear en su interior y se regalaron a la desesperación.
"Si lo hubiera empujado a un lado ... ella siempre se interpone en el camino ... ¿por qué demonios no se preocupe tanto por mí?! ... Debí haber estado allí para ella como ellasiempre estuvo ahí para mí ... Yo debería haber dicho a su cómo me fel ... "
Sin embargo, sus pensamientos fueron interrumpidos por craqueo risa. Inmediatamentenudillos agrietados del erizo marino apretados como la adrenalina bombeada a través desus venas. Dejar ir de los caídos levantó él miró a su enemigo sin piedad. Y todo lo que se hizo eco en su mente era un asesinato!
Pero el destino estaba en su contra hoy no muy lejos de los coches de policía paseabancerca. Sus alarmas cortan el sepulcro silencio. No sería capaz de darle vida si se quedabamás tiempo. Esa es la razón por la que renunció a su vida ¿no? Ella quería que él viviera.Era difícil dejarla ir, pero si él la llevó consigo no había nada que pudiera hacer por ella. El equipo paramédico pudo arreglar su hasta conseguir su un buen funeral. Ella se merecía algo más que un funeral de mierda!
"Puntazo!" Los coches se acercaban. Una vez más tocar sus plumas que tomó su aromade fresa fresca con la empresa se vio empañado por la sangre. Con una última mirada que le echó a correr solo con la policía caliente en su cola.
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Comments: 239
aidah15 In reply to ??? [2011-01-03 16:57:33 +0000 UTC]
of course you can if you saw my first ever sonic drawing you would faint
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Sonamy4ever2011 In reply to aidah15 [2011-01-03 21:44:47 +0000 UTC]
well thanx, but im telling the absolute truth....
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aidah15 In reply to madebydust [2010-12-25 08:12:18 +0000 UTC]
yeh but this was just a last minute one-shot
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UltimateSushiLord In reply to ??? [2010-12-24 16:56:01 +0000 UTC]
Ok, ima cracking my fingers to write a good, helpful comment like you told - uh - requested me to give you.
Now there's hardly any trouble with the picture here. The colours look suited to the overall appeal of the whole Sonic multiverse and the expressions here are exceptional, but credit goes to the original line artist, no?
The only trouble I had with this piece was its perception. Since Amy is lying on the ground, the shadows should have been sharper and darker everywhere her body rests on the pavement. Similarly, Sonic's shadow should have been stretched out. I know you tried doing that, but there was room for more, because when I first saw this, I was confused where the pavement was going. It looked like either Sonic was on the ground too or the pavement lifted from where Amy was to become a background.
So all you need to do here is just work on your shadows to show clearer depth and perception.
I'm hoping that you take my words into consideration, because I'm really keen on seeing how you experiment with my line-art.
Surprise me, k'?
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aidah15 In reply to UltimateSushiLord [2010-12-25 08:13:53 +0000 UTC]
ok exactly the shadows that what I needed to work on thanks I'll take that in consideration but remember your picture needs no shadows
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ShadowReaper12 In reply to ??? [2010-12-21 13:37:13 +0000 UTC]
OMG! SO HIGHLY DRAMATIC!! FAVE!
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migi64 In reply to ??? [2010-12-18 19:58:01 +0000 UTC]
This pic is amazing and incredibaly sad.
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Winter-Rymes In reply to aidah15 [2010-12-18 19:42:31 +0000 UTC]
thats what i figured
why? though
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aidah15 In reply to Winter-Rymes [2010-12-18 19:44:59 +0000 UTC]
did you read the story up there?
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artmagedtom In reply to ??? [2010-12-18 17:26:10 +0000 UTC]
WOW well what can I say I am completly blown away by this artwork it's so moving so detailed
and so very awesome you succeded on a mahoosive scale with emotion here
and to top that you have a short story aswell to go with it it's a sad artwork and story
but I love it. now if you don't mind i'll be faving this now
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aidah15 In reply to artmagedtom [2010-12-18 17:35:10 +0000 UTC]
now thats the best comment I've gotten so far with the exception of my close friend. of course fav it 1000 times I felt so happy while reading your comment thanks
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artmagedtom In reply to aidah15 [2010-12-18 17:49:06 +0000 UTC]
Your very welcome I coudn't just leave it as a
"great" or "awesome" it deserves alot more than
that and i'm glad it made you happy
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aidah15 In reply to artmagedtom [2010-12-18 19:12:02 +0000 UTC]
thats exactly whats missing in artists today appreciation. I'm glad their still nice people like you who acknowledge effort its what keeps us hard workers going.
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aratis16 In reply to ??? [2010-12-18 11:27:14 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD. ............. i need a moment to write about the EPICNESS in this pic.
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Its brilliant. The story is epic-ly moving and one can feel the emotions you've portrayed. Im almost at the brink of tears. :' DDDDDDD
And dont even get me started on the colouring. the scene, the light, the blood heck even the colour combination are just PERFECT. Im in LOVE with this pic. And im still in AWE.
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WOW.
You're getting better and better with every picture. srsly AWESOME.
they're still some glitches but heck enough with the critique. ;333333333333333333333
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aidah15 In reply to aratis16 [2010-12-18 12:34:10 +0000 UTC]
wowo wowowowo tara hold up no critic !
I must have really improved yeah worked on this like one week but the homework and tests you know wouldn't free me!you know we all go through that torture!
oh the story thanks I really had to think on that one!applying the new style as usual.not too mushy it wasn't meant to be too romantic just pure tragic
I'm glad you liked it
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aratis16 In reply to aidah15 [2010-12-18 14:26:30 +0000 UTC]
LIKED IT? LIKED IT? I LOVED IT.
and yes i'm glad you adopted this style it suits you.
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aidah15 In reply to aratis16 [2010-12-18 15:56:16 +0000 UTC]
thanks tara! :hugs: I'll keep this style of writing
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aidah15 In reply to UltimateSushiLord [2010-12-18 08:29:48 +0000 UTC]
are you insane woman I was getting sick while adding the blood
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kimmykay In reply to ??? [2010-12-18 06:15:18 +0000 UTC]
Holyyy crap! This is awesome!! I'm touched.
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aidah15 In reply to kimmykay [2010-12-18 08:29:25 +0000 UTC]
thank you I just loved your pencil work so I just had to color it
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