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Published: 2015-03-18 10:58:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 7280; Favourites: 318; Downloads: 0
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Too choppy. Needs more in-betweens. I think.Probably isn't even possible for grems to run like that.
And I think I'm missing out on the fair overlapping of both the left arm and leg pair and the right arm and leg pair.
If...Anyone understood what I just said.
Grem2 Species made by MrGremble Β
I hope I'm not bothering you with all the tags.
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Fiercefauna [2022-08-11 03:32:37 +0000 UTC]
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trisharooz [2015-04-02 20:58:44 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
At first glance, this is a pretty smooth animation for what it is. It's very sketchy and loose, and can't have more than 7 or so frames, but it flows very well. The tail seems to bounce pretty well, not too excessively and just enough so it's not just odd scribbles everywhere.
From what I can see, the front and back legs move really well...especially the back legs, they push up the character's back end at just the right moment.
I can see the drag in the front legs, the lowering of the rib cage area, and the whole head and chest seems to bounce and move nicely with the motion.
Original, yes definitely! Every body part of this creature looks unique and original, and it's not always easy animating body parts when you can't reference a real life creature for movement, at least from what I have experienced.
Yes, it's choppy, but it's a rough animation, and rough animations are always so.
Overall, I think this looks great so far, and with added frames would turn out to be a very well done animation! I look forward to seeing that if it's ever continued!
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aignavus In reply to trisharooz [2015-04-03 00:45:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch Trisha. :')
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bigbubbleHL [2015-09-22 12:02:38 +0000 UTC]
omg... i was looking around and.. BAAAAM.. i saw this AMAZING EPIC animation down below under "more from deviantart" ...Β
realy... this is soo awesome!!!! i always wanted to learn how to animate the movement of animals! and here the best animatior ever!!!! OMG THIS IS SOOOOO FANTASTIC!!!!! from now till forever i will stay your greatest fan!
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AngelCnderDream14 [2015-08-22 05:03:02 +0000 UTC]
I think its pretty great, and that creature ooks interesting!
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aignavus In reply to AngelCnderDream14 [2015-08-24 14:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Yes. I love how shapey these guys are. I'm glad you like it thanks!Β
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AngelCnderDream14 In reply to aignavus [2015-08-25 23:33:17 +0000 UTC]
No problem, and cool!
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R-FakonWolf [2015-03-20 03:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh it's looks GREAT!
I think this is pretty awesome
ps. it's made me think of a cuteΒ Leopard Gecko
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red-anteater [2015-03-18 21:44:57 +0000 UTC]
oooh I like this allot *v*
I could totally imagine some grems run like that :0c
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aignavus In reply to red-anteater [2015-03-18 21:53:16 +0000 UTC]
It's really funny 'cause your anim of Rex(?) running inspired me to do this.
And then you dropped a comment.
All hail.
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red-anteater In reply to aignavus [2015-03-18 22:09:33 +0000 UTC]
oh gosh //v//
I'm honored
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KireiAoi [2015-03-18 18:30:48 +0000 UTC]
it actually looks really smooth in the thumb
weird XD
either way this is pretty awesome
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aignavus In reply to KireiAoi [2015-03-18 21:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Smaller images = Smoother I guess.
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Shadoritos [2015-03-18 18:07:22 +0000 UTC]
I would add a bit more movement to the tail and neck but this looks really freaking great overall wow ;A;
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aignavus In reply to Jade-Stardust [2015-03-18 21:54:45 +0000 UTC]
I think I killed it when I tried to 'fix' it though.
Asghfgds I don't even want to update this with the 'new' one.
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Jade-Stardust In reply to aignavus [2015-03-18 22:16:01 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry cx
I'm sure you can do it! <3
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MrGremble [2015-03-18 14:56:35 +0000 UTC]
i love it when i see things that i thought were impossible for grems to do :'I
CLEARLY IT ISNT LOL, and this makes sense too, its really good!!
i think it might need to be slowed down a tiny bit?Β
and maybe the arms need to stretch out more during the lunge? i mean those are some pretty powerful legs, i bet if you put some more emphasis on the stretch out in the front, youll get it!
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CrossDevice [2015-03-18 12:03:30 +0000 UTC]
Doesn't look that choppy, though it might just be due to the high frame speed.Β
In any case, its not too bad
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wasabi06 [2015-03-18 11:57:05 +0000 UTC]
I think this is pretty awesome and proffessionnal, actually.. I don't know a lot about animating but this looks good.
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Moenkin [2015-03-18 11:07:46 +0000 UTC]
Looks cool!
Maybe It's missing an image mid-air with no contact on the floor?
And on the last image when the foot touches the floor, have the arm of the floor starting to raise and prepare to be thrown lifted up?
Awesome job so far anyway!
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aignavus In reply to Moenkin [2015-03-18 11:19:57 +0000 UTC]
I'll try that. Thanks a lot Moen.
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Moenkin In reply to aignavus [2015-03-18 11:24:56 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I hope it'll helpful ><
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aignavus In reply to Moenkin [2015-03-18 11:54:00 +0000 UTC]
....Never mind. I think I just made it worse. 8D
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aignavus In reply to Moenkin [2015-03-18 12:08:31 +0000 UTC]
No no omg it's me it's my fault
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