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Published: 2013-03-19 22:01:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1743; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 10
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Practice on coloring with teen Saya Irino as the subject. I think I'm improving (a bit). Noticed some errors but I don't think its important for now.I should get a better artwork down the line sometime.
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Comments: 21
Black-Bird-Zaiden [2013-04-12 19:01:51 +0000 UTC]
Love the red shading on the eye and the Hair shading too. I think it looks good.
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Candor-Shade [2013-03-20 05:05:26 +0000 UTC]
I feel the nose should be moved a little to the right and down, didn't she always have teh long nose?
The hair doesn't feel like it flows all too naturally. I like the definition with the hands, but I don't think the sailor outfits have sleeves that are that tight.
Why do you like Saya so much, I don't like how she gets in the way of subconscious crazy ubermensch quest for individuality and power.
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AikiYun In reply to Candor-Shade [2013-03-20 05:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh come on it was just a coloring practice. >_<
I don't know. She seems very interesting and there's way too many gap in her story.
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Candor-Shade In reply to AikiYun [2013-03-20 06:30:02 +0000 UTC]
I usually don't feel the need to shower someone with praise unless joking, and usually am too lazy to try and find faults, idk.
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AikiYun In reply to Candor-Shade [2013-03-20 06:33:10 +0000 UTC]
Bah I'm opening to criticism and pointing out of where to improve.
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Candor-Shade In reply to AikiYun [2013-03-20 06:49:08 +0000 UTC]
No one really even comments on my stuff; but then again I don't join any groups or advertise my stuff.
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AikiYun In reply to Candor-Shade [2013-03-20 06:50:31 +0000 UTC]
You should. You might get some positive feedback on where to improve.
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Candor-Shade In reply to AikiYun [2013-03-20 17:43:51 +0000 UTC]
Well you don't follow my crap
Meh, I improved on my own without criticism ever since around 2010? Mainly now I think it's a matter of getting better colored pencils, thinner pens, good crayons, etc... Or being less clumsy in general in Flash, although my tablet is pretty junk. Never really learned to work with gradients tbh.
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AikiYun In reply to Candor-Shade [2013-03-20 18:25:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh I look at your stuff here and there.
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