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Published: 2012-09-12 20:16:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 899; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 10
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My second submission forWeek 64 therme: A robotic/mechanical pony
Mechanical hands!!!!!!!
I know that a pony infused with nanites that can be used to create machines isn't technically a robot, but it is half pony half machine. I just hope I'm not the only around here who knows and likes Generator Rex.
Also this is my first submission with the drawing scanned, and I think it looks better than the ones recorded with the camera, so I will try to submit them like this from now on.
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me encantan este tipo de dibujos de Lyra, son lo mejor XD
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I drew something quite like this, too!
And don't worry~ You're not the only one around here who likes Generator rex
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This is brilliant, I love it! I find it tricky to draw ponies bipedal, which is probably why I try to do it all the time 
Then again, Spade's anatomy is far from conventional, so take my advice with a pinch of salt
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Thanks for the feedback! I still have to practice a lot of non conventional pony poses, but I appreciate you took the time to give me your advice, and I will take it in count for future drawing ideas.
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Any time! Everyone tells me the most important thing is to keep practicing, but I think the most important thing is to keep having fun
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Time for some feedback!
The idea is very nice. I must also say this work looks good as a thumbnail, but at the closeup...there are a couple of things I would like to point out.
Firstly, when using a scanner, it would be good to use an additional sheet of paper at the back of the main one. It will prevent your scanner from overexposing your works (I don't know if I used a proper world, but I hope you know what I'm talking about
Now something about Lyra:
I don't know, but she really doesn't look like a pony. Her chest looks like if it belonged to a man. It's because of this shirt on her (I don't even know if it's a shirt at all, but I assume so).
I also see something wrong with her legs. I suppose it's a matter of some missing lines, because now they seem for me to be something like trousers. I am also not sure about her right ear, which looks a little too broad.
Now something about good things: I think you really have drawn her facial expression very well. Also the goggles are a great addition to her. Moreover, her robotic hands looks fantastic!
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Thanks for the feedback man. I really appreciate the fact that you took the time to analyze it and see this details that I hadn't noticed(the scanner one I noticed just after uploading it, and the ear was a mistake I made when redrawing it with the pen). I will take all your tips so I can continue improving in future drawings, and I'm sure they will help me a lot.
So thanks again
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Cool. Lyra would have alot of fun with the Smack Hands.
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Of course, hands are her specialty
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