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Published: 2003-12-10 22:16:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 127
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Edits:Added planes
Lightened shadows
Put dotted line above arm
Lightened pointing hand
Added 1814
Anything else!?
Really, any suggestions for improvements are welcome!
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Comments: 47
Your art is really awesome and friggin' original... this one reminds me of Magritte's paintings... The colors, the idea... afterall, it seems, airports aren't *that* depressing...
Loved it.
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i used Flash MX (2004 professional)
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you amaze me.. in a whoel lotta ways.... awesome job...
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excellent work - very modern and clean - great composition and i love the neutral colors b/c it goes with the modernity to me - the flat cool blues/greys
great job
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yeh i only realised that I had done that when it was almost finished. I was going to put something really bright in but realised its all in a colour scheme. Guess things like that just happen naturally... thanks for commenting
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great update ash
If I have to submit this myself to have it as my ID, then I will tell people to go to you and give u all the credit
Thanks mate
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oh yeh and sorry its nothing special...
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Why? You don't like this updated version?
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haha yeh its ok! i just thought id use that icon for once!
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I seem to be late with my comment! I love it! When its all finished (if u are changing the stuff that people have said) i will use it!
Oh coud u add the 1814 if its no trouble?
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I guess the dotted line means the girl is looking at the man... but you said three things pointing to her.
Anyway, I like this GREAT work.
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It wasnt intended for her to looking at him, but the lines go to her face so I guess she is... do you think a plane would be a nice addition?
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The current one looks pretty COOL to me.
... But I want to see more of your GREAT work, so you know my answer.
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i really like this.. social commentry, design, with a twist of style and sexuality. nice
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hehe
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Wow, cool piece!! Looks very professional!! I just watched Catch me if you can, the movie, and this picture reminds me of it! Good job!! D
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ha. wow yeh it does remind me of that film too. Hmm, i might put a plane in somewhere...
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Yo AJD, like the pic, i am not sure if I like the hand pointing at the girl. The line does that, so you have two things fighting for you attention. Unless that is what you were going for.
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yes it was the idea. she is the object_7... there are three things pointing to her.
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cool work, i like the orginal idea, the message seems pretty clear, for improvements maybe a lil more detailed design ad some typo/vector deisgn elemnts just get creative obviously you can do that since ur piece is a lil more creative than a standard vector, keep up the good work
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cool so reckon just add some more stuff... i'll try.
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Nice and simple. I like it but I think a few things could be fixed. The white dotted line and the text seems a little unsuited for the image. It could use more layers but It's fine without them. I must say I love the subject
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It could be me... but it seems to flat... But then again your art surpasses mine...
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thanks for the comment. what do u mean it needs more layers?
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Thats really awesome, dude. I understand that the white line is a representation of the guy's line of sight.
If my assumption is correct, then i suggest not having the line going over his arm. It gives the idea that he
is looking under his arm to see the chick, which really isnt possible...
Apart from that, this is really well done. The colour scheme and the whole layout is superb.
Great work indeed.
~Mimic
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Yeh I know what you mean. I did delete it, but then it didnt look like the line was going to his eye. What I might do is draw in his head so that I can draw it up to his face and put it the right side of his arm.
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It looks really nice Ash.
There are two things that could or might be fixed. The white dotted line. It should fo infront of the mans arm instead of going behind it. Because of it behind it, it makes it look like the woman is also in the foreground and not the back. It makes it look like shes attatched to this line that's attatched to his arm.
And the shadow should be lighter. It's the same color has the man's suit. It should be lighter so it would be able to make it out as a shadow, might add more depth.
Great job!
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yor are right about the shadow. I'll change that. The dotted line too... Thanks for the tips.
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