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Published: 2012-02-27 18:40:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1937; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 26
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This was a quick sketch I liked that I decided to color. Needless to say it spiraled out of control.I'm so goddamn impatient, I wanted to see how much time and detail I could put into a digitally colored piece. I enjoy the outcome, even though it looks nothing like what I usually do. I found myself going back and touching up things I would have never given a second glance to before. If anything I'm proud of how anal I was with this. Also I'm proud that I could sneak in the word 'anal' in my artists comments.
Obviously some things aren't perfect. After about 16 hours I sorta rushed through Bane's wrist guards, I was just done emotionally with it.
I've never requested critique on a piece because this is a fanart account and I feel I don't take any of my pieces seriously enough to warrant a critique. But I'd like to know what you guys think, and if you like this coloring approach and if you want to see it more.
Or if you want to tell me I'm terrible and should crawl into a hole and never draw again. Honestly I'm just glad I'm getting any kind of feedback
brush pen, paint tool Sai
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Comments: 12
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It looks awesome! The perspective turned out really well, which is good because perspective is HARD. I have to point out that Ahsoka's arms are a little skinny, and her torso is a little squished. Also, her left hand looks a bit odd, the first finger is kinda long and clawlike. Her face and expression look really good though. I also really like the idea of the whole pic - its all symbolic of how Bane likes to chase people and how hes a perv and stuff. RUN AHSOKA! RUN!
I also really like the color scheme you used! Bane's skin and Ahsoka's headtail thingys and eyes really stand out against the red background. Bane's wrist guards look fine! I usually just bs them as well. Theyre ridiculously complicated e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/fā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Overall: Amazing pic with cool theme and great technique! Just minor errors here and there that dont really take away from the overall appearance of the pic. Great job! Have a cookie! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/cā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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AHHHHH my first da critique!!! 
LOOOOL AHSOKA WHY YOUR ARMS SO SKINNY??? Lol, you basically mentioned the little tidbits that I had problems with as well. I may go back and touch it up based on your suggestions
Also, thank you so much for taking the time, it really means a lot to me
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Youre welcome! Glad I could help!
Ahsokas arms are pretty skinny in the show though, which is weird considering the fact that lightsaber battles would probably build arm muscle really fast...
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Holy MOTHER FUKIN SHIT!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO GORGEOUS IM HAVING A MINNY SEIZURE HERE!!!! Where do I start????!!!!
First, ohmahlord, dem hands. Bane's hand are so incredible! Bravo on how you made them bony and lookin like his real hands.
Second, a red background fits any CadSoka pairing fudgin perfect!
Ahsoka's innocent surprised look is so perfect for this scene.
In other words, it would be most appropriate to name this piece "In the Grasp Of the Devil." That's the first thing that came to my mind anyways.
Bravo on a absolutely stunning piece!!!
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Absolutely fantastic. Once my brain puts itself back together this is most certainly getting the well thought out critique it deserves
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I'm just happy you didn't give him fingernails. I hate when people give Bane fingernails. He doesn't karkin' have them.
Also, very nice picture. +Fav.
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Nope. He does not. Which means he has a very hard time picking up change he finds in the street.
Bane: "Mother karkin'!.... can't pick up a dime wit' dese fingers!..."
Thanx for the fav
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The red blurs on her legs look out of place. Otherwise, I like it.
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You mean the ones on her leggings? I was looking at the thumbnail and those seemed to jump out at me more than I had hoped, so I agree with you
Thanks for the comment
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