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Published: 2006-06-10 14:57:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 89006; Favourites: 1390; Downloads: 1107
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Dib stumbled out from the door, coughing and wheezing. He took a few steps forward before turning his eyes, red rimmed with smoke and exhaustion towards his burning house."Dad! Gaz!"
With a burst of adrenaline, he sped back towards his house only to be thrown back onto the unforgiving tarmac. A large explosion wracked the building, causing the windows of the top floor to shatter spectacularly. Dib automatically shielded himself from the shards that rained down onto him - still a few managed to shred through the thin material of his pajamas and into his skin. He curled tighter into himself, not being able to bear his anguish, the horrible crackling noises and the screaming, oh god, the cacophony of screaming around him. And yet a clear voice roused him enough to lift his head.
"Beautiful isn't it?"
Dib wiped his face roughly with the back of his hand and looked around. He had not realised how all the houses on his street were on fire, flames licking hungrily up the walls to reach the night sky. And in the midst of all that, was a familiar shadow facing the backdrop of a burning city.
"...Zim?"
The shadow pivoted to half face him. “Yes, Dib-human.”
The undisguised alien was hoisted off the ground by his mechanised spider legs. Thin arms hung limply on his suited-up frame but the incredibly malicious grin that he wore explained everything.
Dib's eyes widened as he barely stood up. "It was you? All this... your fault?"
Of course he refused to believe it. He'd never expect Zim to actually accomplish in destroying anything. He'd always count that he himself would be there to stop him and save the world.
Shadows danced animatedly on the large orbs that served as Irken eyes and if possible the grin grew even wider.
"Answer me! It was you, wasn't it?! How could you!"
Pain tore through the boy's already trembling body. Tears streaked heedlessly down his soot-stained cheeks. But sheer unpleasantness of his shock had rooted his bare feet to the spot.
Finally, Zim spoke.
"It was so simple in the end. I didn’t even have to devise some amazing feat of technology. All I had to do was go downtown and shoot up the place.” A well-placed pause. “Y’know, I'm almost disappointed that your pathetic stinky species didn't put up much of a fight. They just stood there like... a moose in a headlight and did nothing but panic and run around. It was amusing to watch while I rained doom over and over in your doomed city."
The Irken Invader laughed loudly, cruelly and continued. "And to compliment my absolute incredible genius plan, I used your people's security locks against them. I overrided the manual locks and no one can get out. I was counting on YOU getting out however so I left your house untouched. Can you hear them, Dib-beast? Your precious hi-oo-mans calling for help? I don’t think they have enough intelligence in their inferior brain-meats to try another way out other than the door."
Zim always did like to talk. And he was manically laughing again, his grating voice filled to the brim with glee and utter smugness.
All Dib could do was yell out "ZIM!" and charge at him. But he was blind with fury and met the tarmac for a second time - courtesy of one of Zim's spider legs casually flicking him away like an annoying fly.
"I've played this game long enough. I'm bored with it. Soon the Armada will be here, your dirt-ball of a planet will be completely conquered and I shall be congratulated for finally putting this charade of a mission to a rest."
Dib hardly noticed that Zim had been holding a weapon the entire time. Before he could react, the laser-gun was pointing straight at him and Zim was sneering, an empty twist of that slash of a mouth that held no mirth.
"Game over, Dib. Goodbye."
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Shit that was a long extract. Excuse the crappiness of it, I whipped it up on notepad in 10 minutes. Remember those old adventure books? "If you choose so and so, turn to page 39." Well from here, you have the following three options.
1) Zim blasts Dib into oblivion.
2) Dib manages to miraculously escape the blast and an epic battle ensues.
3) Zim sets the gun to stun at the last minute, renders Dib unconscious, takes him back to his space ship and then turns him into his own personal sex slave (it's my favourite option kekekeke and THIS will be the result: [link] )
Man! I can't get enough of Zim! Unfortunately, I keep drawing him taller ... and I can never decide on what shape I should do his head. Anyone else have that problem? *sighs*
The lineart of the background is not mine (cause I'm so bloody lazy... But I'm going to have nightmares about those stupid fires *makes a face*). I got it off the Room with a Moose website and the original can be viewed here [link]
Done with Photoshop CS2, tablet.
Invader Zim and Characters do not belong to me, but to Jhonen Vasquez and *blargh* Nickelodeon.
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Comments: 226
PeanutSander [2009-10-15 21:35:11 +0000 UTC]
awesome.. i love the story... and the pic of course.. great job on the flames.. couldn´t do this better myself...
this story also inspired me and wanting too convert this scene into a flash movie... awesome.. really awesome..
Fav´d
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PeanutSander In reply to PeanutSander [2009-10-15 21:37:03 +0000 UTC]
oh and ill choose 1 for a great ending too the Invader Zim episodes (but i want too continue the series of course.. there shall be no ending of invader Zim!)
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PeanutSander In reply to PeanutSander [2009-10-15 21:39:33 +0000 UTC]
i also noticed that dibs hand is really long.. xD
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Tib-Dunncan [2009-07-15 23:22:20 +0000 UTC]
Sniff sniff... Poor Dib. God, those ARE freak Flames...
You MADE me look at the freak flames! However, I haven't had a nightmare since I was seven... so...
Awesome Work, though!
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sgtOBNOXIOUS [2009-06-10 21:59:24 +0000 UTC]
i actually felt for dib when i read the story lol. but zim still rulez. its about damn time he did something constru-i should say, destructive with his time =]
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CampLazloFangirl [2009-04-13 23:11:41 +0000 UTC]
2 and awesome pic come and check out my videos on youtube heres the link [link] and rate and comment
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Sad-Little-Panda [2009-03-22 17:19:09 +0000 UTC]
Though story is deliciously wicked, *psychopath grin*
the drawing is kinda... to put it bluntly, that looks nothing like Zim at all.
The flames are really good though. =O
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CrazyZimFangurl [2009-01-04 19:19:25 +0000 UTC]
wow thats so deep omg
great story dude
YESS DIB DIES!!!!
at least i hope so...
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MrsInvaderZim [2008-11-30 13:30:02 +0000 UTC]
I always knew Zim hated Dib. Right here, this is HATE. If this was zadr I wouldn't be able to fave it but because it isn't, that means I can.
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ak-47 In reply to kyubigirl [2008-10-07 22:16:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the fave!
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kyubigirl In reply to ak-47 [2008-10-08 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]
I loves it this is SO REALISTIC and your welcome
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darkleprachaun [2008-08-26 18:08:56 +0000 UTC]
oh.... wow.... this is probably the most craziest zim fan art i have seen. after that i am speechless
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FractiousLemon In reply to ??? [2008-08-06 12:28:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Amazing job combining the look of the cartoon with a pseudo-realistic one. I've always found Zim somewhat scary, but he's truly frightening here! I'm also fond of the description, as it clearly shows a level of intelligence in writing far beyond what Jhonen Vasquez is capable of, yet Zim still has his habit of stammering over words and repeating himself over and over.
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CrazyZimFangurl In reply to ??? [2008-06-30 21:28:06 +0000 UTC]
wow, i always knew zim would do it!!
i hope he kills dib
thats a deep story(to me)
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piratedragonlady95 [2008-03-29 05:50:08 +0000 UTC]
WOW!!!!!!! awsome story and picture!!!!!!!
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alorix [2008-01-30 22:59:08 +0000 UTC]
Wow! When did Zim become a threat?! lol love by the way.
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PeridotHorntail [2007-10-24 23:13:44 +0000 UTC]
I vote for 2. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, 2!
*loves Dib too much to see him die or be made into a sex-slave*
Also, this reminds me very much of the Stephen King book Carrie. Inspiration, maybe?
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Arkestus [2007-10-15 19:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Thats very cool, I like the technique used to paint the flames. Almost looks like a better version of the crappy thing I was trying to do, yet yours clearly worked
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Nozomi--Chan [2007-09-01 21:42:18 +0000 UTC]
k. thats freakin awesome.... except for the slave thinger... if it wasnt THAT kind of slave.... DDDX but I LOVE the story.
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The-IZ-Gore-Club [2007-08-30 20:48:54 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly dark, and such a deep storyline too..
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ak-47 In reply to ChadTheGriffin [2007-07-19 10:26:51 +0000 UTC]
heh thanks! And thanks again for the fave
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xamagumox [2007-07-07 17:15:37 +0000 UTC]
I didn't think Zim would really kill Dib, but, in the end I remembered he DID go to Earth to DESTROY it.... so I guess it's only expected. Nice, nice work.
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Thirteen-Ghosts In reply to ??? [2007-06-26 09:26:19 +0000 UTC]
So friggin' dark - sooo awesome *runs around in glee and then stares at picture reading extract for five hours*
Definately a fav.!
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darkraven12189 In reply to ??? [2007-06-23 19:21:10 +0000 UTC]
dib's hand is amazing!!!...*envies your ability to draw hands*
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zangoose215 In reply to ??? [2007-03-10 08:17:23 +0000 UTC]
Zim`s ID pak w/ its spider legs are so hard to draw *jelous look*
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A-Aviwolf [2007-02-01 17:18:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow sweet, I am a huge fan of Invader Zim, ths si wone of the coolest things I have seen to-date.
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ak-47 In reply to A-Aviwolf [2007-02-04 03:13:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, thank you so much! And again, much appreciation for the fave
<--- happy now
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Minten In reply to ??? [2007-01-07 14:13:31 +0000 UTC]
Omg, yeeessssss!!! Amazing pic on amazing Zim... I soooo want him to destroy earth! Love this pic with all my heart.
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Jacob-Macabre In reply to ??? [2006-11-18 21:09:20 +0000 UTC]
Sugar-coated Zombie Monkey Jesus! That is the dogs bol****s! Loved it! i demand to see more! All Hail the almighty Gir! and Zim too i suppose.
Peace out,
keep up the great work.
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ak-47 In reply to Jacob-Macabre [2006-11-18 22:48:58 +0000 UTC]
ooo thank you very much for the kind words and the fave!
And yes, hail to the almighty Gir and Zim!
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SpiritTheHedgehog In reply to ??? [2006-10-22 19:01:11 +0000 UTC]
No.. that story was wonderful <3 I loved it. FINALLY pictures Zim's true creepy evilness. I love the picture.... but yeah, I don't like how tall he looks. But his head is just fine! Super-cool spider legs, aswell... Perfect lil' pink balls as joints...
Yay 3rd option! :///3
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