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Dib stumbled out from the door, coughing and wheezing. He took a few steps forward before turning his eyes, red rimmed with smoke and exhaustion towards his burning house."Dad! Gaz!"
With a burst of adrenaline, he sped back towards his house only to be thrown back onto the unforgiving tarmac. A large explosion wracked the building, causing the windows of the top floor to shatter spectacularly. Dib automatically shielded himself from the shards that rained down onto him - still a few managed to shred through the thin material of his pajamas and into his skin. He curled tighter into himself, not being able to bear his anguish, the horrible crackling noises and the screaming, oh god, the cacophony of screaming around him. And yet a clear voice roused him enough to lift his head.
"Beautiful isn't it?"
Dib wiped his face roughly with the back of his hand and looked around. He had not realised how all the houses on his street were on fire, flames licking hungrily up the walls to reach the night sky. And in the midst of all that, was a familiar shadow facing the backdrop of a burning city.
"...Zim?"
The shadow pivoted to half face him. “Yes, Dib-human.”
The undisguised alien was hoisted off the ground by his mechanised spider legs. Thin arms hung limply on his suited-up frame but the incredibly malicious grin that he wore explained everything.
Dib's eyes widened as he barely stood up. "It was you? All this... your fault?"
Of course he refused to believe it. He'd never expect Zim to actually accomplish in destroying anything. He'd always count that he himself would be there to stop him and save the world.
Shadows danced animatedly on the large orbs that served as Irken eyes and if possible the grin grew even wider.
"Answer me! It was you, wasn't it?! How could you!"
Pain tore through the boy's already trembling body. Tears streaked heedlessly down his soot-stained cheeks. But sheer unpleasantness of his shock had rooted his bare feet to the spot.
Finally, Zim spoke.
"It was so simple in the end. I didn’t even have to devise some amazing feat of technology. All I had to do was go downtown and shoot up the place.” A well-placed pause. “Y’know, I'm almost disappointed that your pathetic stinky species didn't put up much of a fight. They just stood there like... a moose in a headlight and did nothing but panic and run around. It was amusing to watch while I rained doom over and over in your doomed city."
The Irken Invader laughed loudly, cruelly and continued. "And to compliment my absolute incredible genius plan, I used your people's security locks against them. I overrided the manual locks and no one can get out. I was counting on YOU getting out however so I left your house untouched. Can you hear them, Dib-beast? Your precious hi-oo-mans calling for help? I don’t think they have enough intelligence in their inferior brain-meats to try another way out other than the door."
Zim always did like to talk. And he was manically laughing again, his grating voice filled to the brim with glee and utter smugness.
All Dib could do was yell out "ZIM!" and charge at him. But he was blind with fury and met the tarmac for a second time - courtesy of one of Zim's spider legs casually flicking him away like an annoying fly.
"I've played this game long enough. I'm bored with it. Soon the Armada will be here, your dirt-ball of a planet will be completely conquered and I shall be congratulated for finally putting this charade of a mission to a rest."
Dib hardly noticed that Zim had been holding a weapon the entire time. Before he could react, the laser-gun was pointing straight at him and Zim was sneering, an empty twist of that slash of a mouth that held no mirth.
"Game over, Dib. Goodbye."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Shit that was a long extract. Excuse the crappiness of it, I whipped it up on notepad in 10 minutes. Remember those old adventure books? "If you choose so and so, turn to page 39." Well from here, you have the following three options.
1) Zim blasts Dib into oblivion.
2) Dib manages to miraculously escape the blast and an epic battle ensues.
3) Zim sets the gun to stun at the last minute, renders Dib unconscious, takes him back to his space ship and then turns him into his own personal sex slave (it's my favourite option kekekeke and THIS will be the result: [link] )
Man! I can't get enough of Zim! Unfortunately, I keep drawing him taller ... and I can never decide on what shape I should do his head. Anyone else have that problem? *sighs*
The lineart of the background is not mine (cause I'm so bloody lazy... But I'm going to have nightmares about those stupid fires *makes a face*). I got it off the Room with a Moose website and the original can be viewed here [link]
Done with Photoshop CS2, tablet.
Invader Zim and Characters do not belong to me, but to Jhonen Vasquez and *blargh* Nickelodeon.
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Comments: 226
Multiomniversal124 [2018-10-10 03:20:35 +0000 UTC]
My god... I mean... I knew zim was screwed up a little but I... i didn’t think he would be this evil enough to do this.
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SCP173TheSculptureYT [2018-08-03 01:05:03 +0000 UTC]
Dib: zim im gonna kick your butt so hard *mumbling other stuff*
Zim: 0_0
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AngelOfChange [2018-02-25 00:45:47 +0000 UTC]
WOAH! This is amazing! Thank you for sharing. I just rediscovered this show and need something to keep me going!
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ThelemiticMacculyt [2018-02-12 01:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Great job with portraying Zim as actually successful for once. It looks... fitting on him. If only Gaz were there to see him, perhaps he wouldn't feel so empty in his triumph.
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PandaLovesInvaderZim [2015-01-01 03:16:26 +0000 UTC]
Ummm... Option two please! And also, neither of them get to die. Cause they're to awesome.
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mgg121288 [2013-06-03 01:37:26 +0000 UTC]
4) Dib wakes up in his bed only to discover it was just a nightmare.
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BlueMoon865 [2013-05-25 20:02:36 +0000 UTC]
Personally, I believe that was a well written extract and an amazing picture. I believe I'll go with option 1.
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Owltoons [2013-04-11 04:35:16 +0000 UTC]
AND I COME INTO SAVE DA DAAAAAAY!!!!!!! By da way I like 2
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furrywarrior135 [2012-11-16 01:24:56 +0000 UTC]
dib would totaly escape if he didnt, i would make sure zim didnt survive long enough to do any more damage to earth... (i definitly wouldnt let him reach canada)
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GoldenDrakAngel [2012-06-20 19:38:33 +0000 UTC]
nice. could do something about Zims pose though.
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AlvinSevilleIsMINE [2012-04-12 03:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Help return Invader Zim to Nick! Check out [link] for more info please! I'm try to get the word spread around! Help save this amazing show!
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shadethehedge-cat [2012-04-10 01:08:10 +0000 UTC]
Zim is so tall. Wow. What a dark story. It's so sad, it's good. Poor Dib.
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invader-scene [2012-02-02 23:47:44 +0000 UTC]
If the world gets taken over by aliens it better be the Irkens! If its not I'm going to be sooooo upset!
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zoethdragon [2012-01-18 23:39:33 +0000 UTC]
the picture reminds me of Cow boys & Aliens XD ,
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MissBliss8527 [2011-12-27 14:08:52 +0000 UTC]
Not my favourite picture of Zim but the story is awesome.
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InvaderJulia [2011-11-27 17:22:52 +0000 UTC]
AMAYZING! I love this! One of the GREATEST Zim storie I have ever read!
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Mazeomonic [2011-10-11 19:12:56 +0000 UTC]
the story is ritten beautifully and i just can't even believe my eyes
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Crazyozziedandyhoper [2011-08-02 22:39:17 +0000 UTC]
This is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Won't Zim be dissapointed when he finds out his mission is fake? I hope to get his reaction on film XD
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InterfectorFactory [2011-07-23 13:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Great story, I would choose option 1 Dib is just to annoying to keep alive >.<
I like the spider legs and monster-like flames the most! Great job!
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EdEddnEddyRocks13 In reply to InterfectorFactory [2011-12-20 12:44:39 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Dib Looks Like Me! And Talks Like Me, And Has The Same Intrests As Me, And... ****! Who's Been Spying On Me????
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THEPIPLUPFAN [2011-07-14 08:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Cool! Nice drawing and nice story too!
I don't want to take number three's link do I though?
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AelitaSchaefferFan [2011-06-27 20:01:03 +0000 UTC]
Is it just me or do the fires look like Fiendfyre?
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ILuvGirHugs In reply to MagicalTimeTravler [2011-06-11 03:29:58 +0000 UTC]
your icon is full of win.
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ILuvGirHugs In reply to MagicalTimeTravler [2011-06-18 01:32:30 +0000 UTC]
anytime. :3 epic icon
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MagicalTimeTravler In reply to ILuvGirHugs [2011-06-19 13:59:11 +0000 UTC]
hehe thanks
im kinda ditching this account XDD
My new account is for my IZ OC
it's xXInvaderNicXx if your interested in taking a look.
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ILuvGirHugs In reply to MagicalTimeTravler [2011-06-20 20:26:37 +0000 UTC]
k. do you go on youtube?
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