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Published: 2016-09-30 05:08:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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I think this is my first legit (almost) original piece ^^ thank you all for the supports you guys gave meRelated content
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Thanksss Glad you liked it ^^
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I love your use of the color pink and small amounts of blue, it's very eye-catching. The detail on the stairs(I'm pretty sure that's what they are in the background, correct me if I am mistaken) is amazing. However, I feel that maybe the green bracelet is just slightly out of place. Maybe that's just me, but the scheme of blue,pink and purple makes that bracelet pop, but ,hey, maybe that's what you were going for. The strands coming from the necklace and bracelet seem just a little too neat for a drawing showing a struggle of some sort, along with the hair. But your use of colors and textures are just wonderful. You did a great job capturing their expression and I really admire that. The style you have is very interesting and I look forward to seeing more of your art.Β
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Thak you for your kind words (or critiques?)Β Β
yes that's a stairs, i just use a straight line using some square texture brush with low opacity then this happened
yeah i might wanna think about the color placin^^Β
and Β how did you know i was strugglng to make the necklace ? r u psychic ?Β Β
the girl which i took for a reference was wearing a dream catcher necklace (not sure why is she wearing a decoration or whatever)
but yeah it was sooooo hard to make cuz my mind can't handle that much craziness detai;s (yet)
and i look forward of meeting you again sometime in another art ^^
thanks a lot for this
stuff like dis make me wanna even practice n learn more^^
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I'm glad that my feedback helped you in some way! I'm usually nervous giving critique(your word, not mine) because it's only based on what I know so I worry it's a bad one.Β
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awwww come on don't feel bad , no matter bad or good the word from the qritiques may said , the artist will learn from their mistakes and learn how to do it better next time ^^
is that make sense cuz my english are getting a flu right now lol
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That is true! And don't worry, it made sense! ^_^
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The colors on this piece mesmerize me! and the character looks amazing ^~^
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The coloring for this is amazing!! I would suggest having some hair behind his head, to indicate that some it fell through his fingers, instead of that he managed to push it all up. If you do want to go with the idea that he's pushed it all up, I would suggest that you indicate that it's being pushed up by making it stand higher. He wouldn't hold it up naturally unless it was usually longer. The feathers on his bracelet wouldn't fall exactly at the sides of his wrists either, try to make them look more random. And, lastly, his right shoulder should go up a little (similar to the other side). As for the background, it looks simply amazing, and the whites are all in the right places. Just make sure that if you have a pillar closer to you (the bigger ones), they would go a little farther before meeting the ground.
Really good work here. The coloring is great. I look forward to seeing more!!Β Β
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yeah i wonder what happened with her shoulder i wasn't noticing it until now lol (and he's actually a she....)
oh and i was actually gonna do the same thing that you told me to indicates that her hair is being lifted up,but i ended up making her hair the wong way :"(
and man i was strugling to make the necklace XD it was sohard to see and to draw (why would her wear a decoration piece anywa? haha)
thank you soo much for this suggestions you gave me , i'll be sure to improve next timeΒ Β
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I'm so sorry!! i don't know why I thought it was a guy!! I'm really so sorry.
lol. I know what that feels like, starting with one plan and doing something completely different 
Well, the final effect of the necklace was really good, so I'd say it was probably worth it.
You're welcome
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I love the colors of the lighting. And her face. You're really good!
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Thank youuuuu Im glad you Β liked it^^
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why thank youkind sir ^^
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Woah!~ I love how you did the lighting and the shading- perfect!~
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awww thank youu lillie senpaiiii Β
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sENPAI
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ZAnd no problem!~
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