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Page 2!
Creator/Writer: John Akins
Penciler: Marc Ferreira
Inks: Jonas Trindade
Colorist: Mauro Barbosa
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Comments: 23
Hells-Blood [2008-09-29 16:14:20 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done, I think you picked the right artist.
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semaj007 [2008-09-28 13:55:24 +0000 UTC]
This is good! Really good! Got only two little critiques though... Like saber, i also thought that the pyramid exploded behind him. And the other one, his nose looks a lil bit weird before he went supersonic but that's easily fixed though.
Other than that, everything looks great. The angles utilized, the expressions and the flow of the events from panel to panel is clean and clear.
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akins7075 In reply to saber4734 [2008-09-27 23:28:02 +0000 UTC]
No, he just went super sonic.
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Jamibug [2008-09-27 20:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice stuff so far. These are looking much more solid and consistent that the others to me. I also think, as far as story this is a better opening from what I can tell.
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akins7075 In reply to Jamibug [2008-09-27 20:56:20 +0000 UTC]
Yes! Thats what I want to hear! Yea, these first two pages explain a lot of the story. You'll see with the lettering.
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akins7075 In reply to JoshTempleton [2008-09-27 17:49:28 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it bro! Thanks for the !
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