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AkioAria26 — Event 6 , part four
Published: 2012-07-27 19:27:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 551; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 5
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Hooray i made it cooler now ^^.part five [link] and part three [link]
our apps [link]
cover [link]
Cameos
Team Comet Storm [link]
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Your art (or at least drawing pokemon skills) has gotten a lot better, not saying you were bad! But you are improveing ^^ I love the story and characters behind this!
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hey I'm loving the backgrounds you included that express the emotions keep up the good work
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on the legendary Pokemon 
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I was a little confused at what order to read the panels near the top. Mainly it is the third panel that is doing this. When laying out the panels, think about how it will flow. Where the readers eyes will go next once finished with one panel.
Is that a crush Andy has on Jasemine? Well she sure seems to not appreciate it. XP
I love the end to. Man, if only being a rescuer were that easy.
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i see.... and Andy just have a big fan of Legendary man ^^
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Whack!That has got to hurt! xD
I like the way you drew the scenery d:
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