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The Next AvatarZuko sat next to his wife's bed. She was nine months pregnant and the birth could commence at any moment. His brother-in-law sat asleep in a chair by the door, his rhythmic snoring causing Zuko to nod off. A gentle squeeze to his hand sent him shooting up and frantically looking around. “Is it time yet?! What's going on?!” Katara laughed at her anxious husband. “Relax. You really need some sleep. Even Sokka took a break from constantly fluffing my pillow to take a nap.” “No. No, I'm fine. Just...” “Tired?” She said with a smirk. “Yeah, I guess.” “Don't worry. I'm fine.” “Ok. I'll go-” Suddenly, the doors to Katara's room were mercilessly thrown open and the Avatar burst through. The raucous noise caused Sokka to wake up. “What's going on?! Is it time?!!” Aang ignored the questions and went directly up to Zuko. “Zuko!! Zulon is launching an attack on the palace! He's got us completely surrounded and the guards are no where to be found!” Zuko's blood began to boil. “What?! How dare he show his face after I banished him?! And stepping foot in my palace?! That little son of a-!” Katara had to stop her steaming husband, “Zuko!” “What?! She is a-!” This time, it was Aang who silenced them all. “Zuko! We don't have time for this! Something strange is going on! Firebenders, Earth, Water, Air; there are all types of benders out there! It's like the whole world's turned on us!” Katara gasped and both Zuko and Sokka remained silent. “We need to do something! Now!” Sokka started heading towards the door. “Oh, I'll do something alright. Knock some skulls together, that's what I'll do!!” Zuko grabbed him by the shoulder. “No! Stay here with Katara. Me and Aang will go. If something happens, come tell me. Immediately." Knowing there was no use in arguing, Sokka just nodded. “Right, then.” “I've already called for Toph.” “Perfect. Let's go.”
Zuko and Aang made their way through the west wing of the palace until they came outside to the garden that connected the other half of the palace. Coming across from the other side was the world's greatest Earthbender, and the Avatar's wife. “So, what's the plan?” The three adults turned to look at three children at the door from where Toph had come. The two, older girls stood wide-eyed and smiling, staring at the adults. The younger boy's blind gaze was hidden under bangs that went half-way down his nose. Their father walked over to them. “Your plan is to go with Auntie Katara and help Uncle Sokka to guard her.” The girls grinned ear to ear and even young Kenseii managed to crack a smile. “Ok!!” The girls chimed in unison before running across the garden. After they disappeared inside, Zuko addressed Toph and Aang. “I'll try to speak with Zulon. The less fighting, the better. But if he ask for it, let him have it. Aang, don't be afraid to use the Avatar State on him or his men” “Don't worry. I won't. Not this time.” Toph cracked her knuckles, “Let's do this.”
The three benders had made their way to the front of the palace and were now half way down the steps where they could remain a safe distance but be clearly heard by the attackers. Around them, buildings burned, were sunk underground or completely missing, and not a soldier was insight. “ZULON!!!” The land fell silent as benders everywhere stood down. A young boy, only twelve years of age, stepped out from the middle of a crowd. He donned a Fire Nation soldier uniform, and his black hair was tied into a top-knot but he left some hair to form side strands. He stepped to the bottom of the stairs, and stared up at Zuko with golden eyes. “Zulon, what are you doing here? I banished you!!” “Well, I decided I'd come back to visit. Come on, you know you missed me. I'm your favorite nephew.” “You're my only nephew, Zulon. Now I said, what are you doing here?!” “I come with a message from my mother. She orders you to renounce the thrown and title of Fire Lord, or be destroyed.” “I would never let Azula be in control.” “Then face the wrath of the Fifth Nation!! Attack!!!” The benders once again began destroying the palace and surrounding buildings. Zuko turned to Aang and Toph behind him. Toph was already taking out some of the soldiers trying to make their way up the stairs but Aang was staring at Zuko. Once he gave the signal, Aang went into his stance and his eyes and tattoos began to glow. Zulon whispered, “The Avatar State... Now men!! Kill the Avatar!!!” Immediately, the benders left their positions and started rushing up the stairs. Air, Water, Earth, and Fire, united in attacking the one man who controlled them all. Aang used a blast of wind to knock some down but the diversity in attacks kept him on his guard. Zuko was trying his best to fend off the attacking warriors but there were just too many. Suddenly, Zuko heard someone shout his name from behind. “Zuko!! Zuko!!” Sokka was quickly making his way down the steps. “What is it Sokka?! I'm kind of busy!” Zuko managed to knock out a group of benders trying to rush him. “This is it; It's happening! Katara's having the baby!!” “What?! Now?!” “Yes!!” Both Aang and Toph turned to Sokka. “What do we do?” “Toph, go with Katara! She'll need your help. We'll stay here!” Toph ran up the stairs and into the palace. Suddenly, it became dark. The three men looked up to the sun and saw it covered behind a single, black cloud. Zuko looked into the crowd of angry benders and tried to pick out their leader. He wasn't there. Suddenly;y, there was a loud yell and a flash of light. Zuko turned to see Aang fall to his knees, then to the ground. “NO!!” Behind him, Zulon was poised in an attack stance and his fingers were smoking. “AANG!!” “Finally!!! I've finished what my family long ago started! I've destroyed the Avatar!!” The benders all around started cheering. Zuko knelt next to Aang and Zulon stepped behind him. “It's over. Without your precious Avatar, you're nothing.” “Why you little-!!” “Zuko! There's no time! Katara needs you!!” “Go ahead, Zuko, run. I'll catch you another day...” Zuko hated having to leave, but he knew Katara needed him. Without taking his eyes off of Zulon, Zuko backed up the stairs a few feet, then turned to run for his, and his family's, life.
After running through the entire palace, Zuko had finally made it to the outside of Katara's room. Sitting in chairs were the Avatar's now father-less children. They told Zuko that they had to guard from the outside. He gave them a gentle smile and then burst through the doors of Katara's room. It was true, the labor had begun. He immediately went to his wife's side and held her hand. “Zuko!!! I thought you wouldn't make it!” “Of course I would...but...there's something you need to-” “Katara, you can't stop! You need to keep going! Push!” Toph hadn't been able to find a doctor or a healer, so she was delivering the baby herself. “Toph, listen-” “Zuko, there's no time! The baby's almost here!” “...it is...?” “Yes!! Any moment now! Katara, keep going!!” “Ow!” Zuko looked down at Katara's hand crushing his. “Sorry!” “Almost there!” Katara gave one final push; one final scream, and then it was over. Zuko felt the blood begin to flow back into his hand. He quickly looked it over. “Oh, grow up, you big baby and come get your son.” Toph had quickly swaddled the baby and was now holding him out for Zuko. “...son...? I have a ...son...?” He soon forgot his own pain and grinned as he went to receive his child. He took him in his arms and uncovered him and looked him over. Eyes, nose, fingers and toes; everything a healthy baby boy should have...and something more. Zuko gasped as he stared down at his newly born son. He had dark skin and blue eyes like his mother, and a full head of black hair like his father. But he had something else... There was a band of blue skin around his neck as if it were a necklace. The same band was around his wrists and ankles. “What is it?” Katara began to worry at Zuko's tunned expression. He silently walked over to his wife and showed her their child. She gasped and covered her mouth as she saw their baby's tattoos. “But then that means that he...?” Zuko nodded. “And now he is...?” Katara looked down at her baby. She knew Aang had died, but she didn't know that he died in the Avatar State. The Avatar shouldn't have been reborn. Somehow...Zuko and Katara were the parents of The Next Avatar.
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Comments: 83
lilyaugust1 [2011-12-19 23:45:20 +0000 UTC]
Just for accuracy's sake, the markings don't make the avatar, the air nation has the tatoos. The next avatar would be water nation. Still... this story is good, like really good.
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DeviantArtist000 [2011-03-27 17:14:02 +0000 UTC]
Im kinda curious as to how the new avatar would work.
Wouldn't Katara have had to had..ahem that with Aang in order for that to work?
(And actually it takes 100 years for the next Avatar to be reborn, not a week)
I liked the story though
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akkigrl In reply to DeviantArtist000 [2011-03-28 03:26:39 +0000 UTC]
Haha, well, being the Avatar isn't genetic (in fact, it's kind of the opposite since they rotate Nations -air, water, earth, fire-) but yes, in order to produce a new Avatar, that would have to happen. I'm sure it'd be between presumably married adults though. But yes, that's how it'd be done. X)
Well, not a week but I'm sure it's not 100 years either! Hahaha. Aang disappeared for 100 years, but he'd already been born and living when he left. I'm not sure exactly how long it takes for the next Avatar to be born after the previous dies. (It can't be too long though, otherwise chaos would break out in that time!)
Haha, thanks! Glad you did!
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DeviantArtist000 In reply to akkigrl [2011-03-28 19:22:33 +0000 UTC]
^^" I didnt really take Aang disappearing for 100 years into consideration. The Avatar rotation does make alot more sense...
Indeed, if the cycle did not continue for another 100 years chaos would ensue. (people would get expectant, angry, ect.)
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akkigrl In reply to DeviantArtist000 [2011-03-28 20:58:06 +0000 UTC]
LOL, that's ok. Yeah, that's why the next avatar is going to be a waterbender (you know about the Legend of Korra, right?
)
Definitely! That and others would take advantage, just like what happened when Aang disappeared. So I'm guessing the time in between avatars can't be too long (but yeah, not instantaneous either )
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DeviantArtist000 In reply to akkigrl [2011-03-30 19:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, I havent seen much about it, (thank you for reminding me, because im gonna go google it right nao) ^-^ but I have seen pictures on avatarspirit.net
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akkigrl In reply to DeviantArtist000 [2011-04-01 03:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no problem! Yeah, avatarspirit.net has a lot of Korra news on their front page right now. Also, if you follow GreenifyME or Trishna87 here on deviantart (both awesome Avatar/Zutara artists) they're always quick to spread Korra news.
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DaniFenton12 [2011-03-25 00:01:49 +0000 UTC]
Aww.I think you should of had Zulon's dad as Jet,cause he has both of Azula and Jet's craziness.
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akkigrl In reply to DaniFenton12 [2011-03-28 03:20:07 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha, that's true. But since this is post-series, Jet is supposed to be dead already. But yeah, that's a good point, lol!
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DaniFenton12 In reply to akkigrl [2011-03-28 03:21:24 +0000 UTC]
But who cares?!You haven't said who his dad is and who Jet is yet,so you should go ahead and write it!
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firelillyz [2011-01-21 03:49:20 +0000 UTC]
has anyone ever told you that airbenders are only born with tatoos?
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akkigrl In reply to firelillyz [2011-01-24 17:58:32 +0000 UTC]
Lol, yeah. Airbenders get their tattoos once they become a master, but I didn't know that back then, haha.
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PrincessMizu [2009-03-08 03:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Normally i don't really go for the ships that you chose, but this was amazing!
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akkigrl In reply to PrincessMizu [2009-04-27 05:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh, wow, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.
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akkigrl In reply to earthrocker48 [2008-08-12 01:50:35 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. Awwwww.
Thanks for reading. ^^
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DragonJadefire [2008-01-07 04:07:00 +0000 UTC]
Hmm....interesting and very good.
Critics.
1: To make things neater everytime there is a new speaker make a new paragraph.
2: The blue bands, while that is a neat and interesting idea, is kinda *grimaces* dorky. I know you wanted to link the baby somehow with Aang. You could've made him have a weird birthmark in the same of an arrow on his palm. (Don't make it blue just make it flesh color)
Zulon...he was definately named after his grandfather.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-07 04:15:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
1) Yeah. >< I'm so used to writing in paragraph form even though I hate essays. >< I did better on my latest one-shot though. I think.
2) I know, but I am a dork. I was trying to come up with a way to explain the blue but I just ended leaving it out. Probably something happened during the early pregnancy, I dunno. I didn't want to get into it though.
Can you tell I like cliches?
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-07 04:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Hmm....well, that explains my problem with my NaruHina child Hoshi. She has Naruto's fox whiskers, but I don't know how she got them. I had this idea that she has some of the demon fox in her. Or is there another fox demon that i don't know about?
I'll go check it out.
do you have my on your devwatch?
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-07 04:28:23 +0000 UTC]
Aww. Cute. ^^
I dunno. I just use the excuse that I'm so the writer so the readers should just go alonog with it.
Not yet. *goes to add you*
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-07 04:42:21 +0000 UTC]
Yay!
Yeah. Hoshi is the daughter of Hinata and Naruto. She has Hinata's pre-Shippuden hairstyle. Hoshi is very much like her mother. Hoshi has the Byakugan as well as her father's bright yellow hair. Hoshi's singature move is the Paper Life jutsu. Hoshi is really good a orgami and she makes orogmai and usd the paper life jutsu to bring her orgmai to life to fight for her. If she uses different colored paper like red paper, her creations will be able to breath and shoot fire.
She has tow brothers. Zenji (who is a bit of a perv when he's a teenager)
Hiro, the youngest is blind in his right eye. His right eye his blue, and his left eye is his Byakugan eye. The doctor told Hinata when he was three, that he shouldn't be a ninja because of his blindness. Since then, Hiro has been determind to prove everyone wrong that he is a great ninja. (And yes, he does want to become Hokage).
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-07 22:59:53 +0000 UTC]
That's sounds cool. I like the different colored idea.
Hah. Niice.
Aww. That's cool. (And of course. ^^)
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-07 23:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Hiro is my favorite. He's very aloof. He's more like Sasuke than Naruto. Zenji and him get into a lot of fights. Hiro has super fast reflexes on his right side.
Hiro has Hinata's hair color, and its tipped with Naruto's yellow. And its spiky! And is a cross between Naruot's hair style and Hinata's hair style.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-07 23:26:15 +0000 UTC]
Interesting.
Haha. That's cool!
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-07 23:44:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, and then I have eight Uchiha brats. Five girls and three boys. Only four of them have the Sharingan. Three are girls and one is a boy.
I mainly focus on Chiyo, who's the middle one. She's a klutz, wasn't this super great ninja, and she's shy. Her best friend is Hyuga Taro the son of Neji and Temari.
Taro is interesting. He should have the Hyuga branch house mark on his forehead, but Taro was born in Suna, and lived there for five years, until Temari and Gaara found out he had the Byakugan. So, they took him back to Neji. (Neji didn't even know he had a son!) Neji, kept his son a secret from the main house.
Something happened between Sasuke and Neji, so where they HATE each other and forbid their children from interacting. Taro and Chiyo are best friends despite this, and they have a little trio, with Hoshi being number three.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-07 23:47:42 +0000 UTC]
Hehe.
Aww. She sounds cool though.
(XD Nice one, Neji. ><
Interesting...
Cool!
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-07 23:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Yep.
Though, Sasuke and Sakura's eldest, Akina is a real bitch. >< She has the Sharingan and thinks she's the best at everything. Sasuke is worried taht Akina will turn into another Itachi. Sakura knows this, but doesn't say anything.
Chiyo and Taro are on the same team, Team 7. With Tomeo Kumara. She has the Kumara clan's kekkai genkai (I was reading about the kekkai genkai on Wikipedia and this one sounded really cool! ^^) to the fullest. Her alter ego is called Dark Tomoe, and Tomoe is known for talking to herself (she's talking to her dark side), which earned her the nickname, Crazy Tomoe. Tomeo refuses to use genjutsu. But sometimes, she can't control her other half so she prone to snapping and attacking her friends and allies, at that point, Kakashi (who is stuck with Team 7....AGAIN! ) has to use his Sharingan to hypnotize her. Kakashi spends a lot of time with Tomoe, helping her to keep her dark side in check, hence Taro and Chiyo spend a lot of time together. (Hmm...almost like Neji and Tenten)
Chiyo has developed her own style, called Void. Her signature move is making shuriken appear as spinning golden stars.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-08 00:12:03 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh, conflict.
Cool. Hehe. Again, of course. ^^ Hehe, cool.
Awesome.
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 00:35:10 +0000 UTC]
Taro always called Chiyo. Chiyo-chan, but when they are older, Chiyo tells him he can all her just by her name, but he's too polite to stop, plus its a way for him to hide his feelings about her.
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]
When they were little Chiyo always called him Taro-kun. But when they got older sometimes she'll just call him Taro and other times Taro-kun.
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 00:40:46 +0000 UTC]
Sasuke is pretty protective of Chiyo. Don't know why. He just is. *It could be something to do with that Chiyo ran away and ran into Itachi*
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-08 00:45:47 +0000 UTC]
Dun dun duuuuuuuun.
Interesting....
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 00:52:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, and the creepy thing is, Sasuke never told his kids about Itachi. Itachi quickly figured it out when Chiyo looks at him funny when he tells her he's Itachi. And, Itachi gives Chiyo this sob story about how he's this orphane and blahblahblah, and Chiyo feels sorry for him and Itachi helps her become a better ninja and then Hinata, Naruot and Sasuke show up. Sasuke reveals that Itachi is the evil jerk he is.
Itachi uses his powerful genjutsu on Sasuke, and Sasuke is forced to not only watch his parents die again but also his wife and kids and its the first time Chiyo ever saw her father cry. So she tackles Itachi, breaking the chakra link between the brothers, Sasuke faints, and Chiyo battles Itachi, and that's how her Sharingan activates.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-08 01:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!!!!!!
(Is all of this on your Ff.net account?)
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 01:14:28 +0000 UTC]
No! I don't have the guts to post this on my ff.net account. Too many flamers and stuff. I have to watch a lot more episodes and some Shippuden episodes before I even write this.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-08 01:43:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh ok. Wow. You have everything planned out.
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 01:45:02 +0000 UTC]
I only have the beginning and end planned out. Naruto is a teacher at the school for a long time. Naruto-sensei, then he becomes Hokage. I don't have the middle planned out.
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akkigrl In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-01-08 01:49:51 +0000 UTC]
Awww. Hehehe. Cool.
Ah, ok.
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DragonJadefire In reply to akkigrl [2008-01-08 02:07:28 +0000 UTC]
It'll get up....eventually.
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