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Published: 2012-03-25 00:10:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 3
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Description your presence intersperses what I do
your patterns intermingle
with my patterns, interwoven
this mixture, what is me and what is you

your inspiration echoes oceanic
in a tone reverberating
elemental sound resounding
surprising so to hear and taste and feel

your smile is seen in consciousness
nine thousand miles, ethereal
in quantum contact sensual
you, warm in essence, circumscribe my soul

pray feel me breathe, "eternity"
across the earth now tenuous
the present fades and disappears
my woken heart goes soaring out to you

more than a muse in permanence
Andromedaean, dominate
my thoughts, desires, my wishes
keep you, beautiful, alive within my mind

yes, feel me reaching out to you
across the seas the mountains
through connection once unbreakable
though told to stop, I have to disobey

the time is long, I persevere
the Universe awaits your voice
your choice, my darling, always
do you understand, and wish to send reply?


llp - mar2012 - dA
written sep2008
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Comments: 26

avfc4me [2012-04-25 02:12:39 +0000 UTC]

this is very sweet.

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alapip In reply to avfc4me [2012-04-25 03:35:49 +0000 UTC]

so are you, Kari.
thanks for all the favs...

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GrannyJae [2012-04-06 21:08:54 +0000 UTC]

longing for the belonging
reaching for the teaching
take the best, feel the beat
let the rest retreat...

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alapip In reply to GrannyJae [2012-04-07 00:30:38 +0000 UTC]

from your nice little poem, Julie,
i think maybe you sense, like i,
that mine could be set to music
too. any ideas?

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GrannyJae In reply to alapip [2012-04-07 01:40:14 +0000 UTC]

oh, my husband is the classical music buff (I'm more 70's bubblegum pop) but flutes and piano and sweet upbeat with a touch of wistful come to mind maybe Nora Jones

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alapip In reply to GrannyJae [2012-04-25 03:40:06 +0000 UTC]

i think i might choose the late Eva Cassidy - [link]

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halcyonshores [2012-04-06 20:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Pip... this is incredibly beautiful .. and a Siren's song in itself.

Bravo

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alapip In reply to halcyonshores [2012-04-06 23:55:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, Dove...
and for the favs!

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halcyonshores In reply to alapip [2012-04-07 20:07:18 +0000 UTC]

The pleasure was mine Pip.

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leyghan [2012-04-05 04:08:30 +0000 UTC]

I knew I'd seen this before. It remains a beautiful tribute whether to muse or goddess. I do like your softer side good sir.

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alapip In reply to leyghan [2012-04-05 13:44:37 +0000 UTC]

or a goddess-like muse...
thanks, Rosie, and for all the favs too!

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FuzzyHoser [2012-03-28 17:34:37 +0000 UTC]

This is stunning, sir.

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alapip In reply to FuzzyHoser [2012-03-28 17:56:22 +0000 UTC]

keyboard - set to stun, Ms Rachael!
activate transporter, Scotty...

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FuzzyHoser In reply to alapip [2012-03-28 18:10:29 +0000 UTC]

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alapip In reply to FuzzyHoser [2012-03-28 21:03:55 +0000 UTC]

my head is full of space... yup

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FuzzyHoser In reply to alapip [2012-03-28 21:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha...there are worse things, man.

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UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-03-27 00:01:54 +0000 UTC]

"your inspiration echoes oceanic
in a tone reverberating
elemental sound resounding
surprising so to hear and taste and feel"

your muse sounds lovely

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alapip In reply to UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-03-27 01:37:52 +0000 UTC]

oh, she is, Zean.
thanks for the fav!

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SchemaTree [2012-03-26 02:37:34 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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alapip In reply to SchemaTree [2012-03-26 03:15:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you, Carly, and for the fav...

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haijinik [2012-03-25 16:47:46 +0000 UTC]

'what i am is us, what we do together is myself...' orson scott card

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alapip In reply to haijinik [2012-03-25 16:54:46 +0000 UTC]

another book, Chris - "i am a strange loop", by Douglas Hofstadter...
[we live each other's patterns]

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haijinik In reply to alapip [2012-03-25 17:21:18 +0000 UTC]

more reading!

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gem-gem-gem-gem-gem [2012-03-25 00:53:43 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous.

faved

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alapip In reply to gem-gem-gem-gem-gem [2012-03-25 16:12:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks, Meg - and for the fav too!

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gem-gem-gem-gem-gem In reply to alapip [2012-03-26 01:35:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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