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albertxlailaxx — Ep 1: The First Meeting

Published: 2012-02-20 01:33:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2755; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 12
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Description I tried something new this time. Instead of redrawing Alphonse with the same outline I just drew my oc with the black outline. Does it look odd? e.e; I think it looks weird...oh well.

For those who don't know, the girl with the black hair is my oc Emeara Song. Her profile and more info about her can be found here:[link]

Storyline: As I mentioned in the last work with her in it, Emeara is homeless and poor and tends to travel from place to place because she can't hold down a job or find a home. One day, when Ed and Al are wandering through a random town, the two go down an alleyway for a short cut. In the alleyway, the Elric brothers meet a beat up girl that looks about their age. Being the polite gentleman he is, Alphonse shows concern for the stranger immediately at seeing her. For Emeara, Al is the first person who had talked to her in a long time. Most people ignore her and walk right by because shes a dirty homeless girl. Eventually Emeara and the Elric brothers get to talking. They tell her that they're searching for the philosophers stone, what happened to their bodies, about the military, and other crap they always tell anyone they meet. Emeara tells the brothers that she's homeless and has no memories of the first 15 years of her life. She is now 17. I'll explain why she has no memories later. Soon after meeting Emeara, the brothers offer to pay a train ticket for her to go to Rush Valley, where they believe she'll be able to find a good job as Winry, their childhood friend, is in the town on business. However, before the three can get on the train, military soldiers show up and arrest Emeara on the spot, claiming she is framed for stealing and murder. She is then taken away, leaving the Elric brothers in shock. I'll explain more in the next work. That's all for now. Hopefully, that wasn't confusing.


Hope you guys like this.

Base used is by
Background is from the D.gray man anime and DOESN'T BELONG TO ME.
Fullmetal Alchemist, Alphonse Elric, and all the other characters belong to Hiromu Arakawa
Emeara c) Me

PART 2:[link]
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Comments: 42

warningyou [2012-08-09 08:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Aw this sounds so good!!
I am supposed to read the story in the description, right? Or is there a fanfic somewhere??
Very cool pics you are using!!!

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albertxlailaxx In reply to warningyou [2012-08-09 16:24:27 +0000 UTC]

yup, the story is posted in the description

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warningyou In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-08-09 17:28:20 +0000 UTC]

OMG lots of comments to reply
Imma gonna go now, see you tomorrow kay?

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albertxlailaxx In reply to warningyou [2012-08-09 18:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Ok ^^

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123icoo [2012-07-16 00:03:35 +0000 UTC]

i love this too much, must read them again until next chapter comes.

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albertxlailaxx In reply to 123icoo [2012-07-16 00:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you. I'm sorry I'm taking so long to get the next chapter posted. Like I said before, I have it written; but I don't have the picture started for it

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123icoo In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-07-16 02:51:07 +0000 UTC]

oh srry for rushing you

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albertxlailaxx In reply to 123icoo [2012-07-16 03:35:14 +0000 UTC]

oh no no you weren't XD I've actually been annoyed at myself for being lazy

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123icoo In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-07-16 03:44:38 +0000 UTC]

oh

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crystalizemyheart [2012-07-15 07:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Woah you're Al is Frakin AMAZING!!!

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albertxlailaxx In reply to crystalizemyheart [2012-07-15 16:16:44 +0000 UTC]

actually that was already drawn in on the base when I used it so I technically didn't draw him

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123icoo [2012-07-11 20:30:39 +0000 UTC]

r u going to make more after chapter 16

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albertxlailaxx In reply to 123icoo [2012-07-11 22:18:46 +0000 UTC]

yes, I actually have the next part written. I just need to draw a pic and it'll be posted ^^ Glad you're taking an interest in it

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123icoo In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-07-12 03:53:28 +0000 UTC]

YESS!!! oh by the way i did my first story can you read it and tell me how you like it and bring anyone to my gallery and read it i'll be happy

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albertxlailaxx In reply to 123icoo [2012-07-12 04:07:51 +0000 UTC]

I'll read it tomorrow when I have time :3

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123icoo In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-07-12 04:51:44 +0000 UTC]

k thnx

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WillieManga [2012-04-07 23:43:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey, what story arc does this take place after?

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albertxlailaxx In reply to WillieManga [2012-04-08 00:19:18 +0000 UTC]

After Ed and Al meet Ling Yao

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ShadowedLove97 [2012-02-26 18:52:48 +0000 UTC]

The storyline is very interesting. I agree that her outline may be a little too think.

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infectitious [2012-02-20 15:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Ooh i'd like to read more....

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beyblade23 [2012-02-20 05:12:41 +0000 UTC]

The lines MIGHT be a bit too thick but other than that, I think it looks great and I really how the story too =3

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albertxlailaxx In reply to beyblade23 [2012-02-20 05:17:23 +0000 UTC]

thats what worried me I'll try to make the lines smaller next time

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beyblade23 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 05:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Lol Try testing out the lines before using that way you know which to go for

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albertxlailaxx In reply to beyblade23 [2012-02-20 05:27:41 +0000 UTC]

yeah I usually don't like using rly thin lines though :/ its harder for me to draw with

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beyblade23 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 05:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol = P I dont either

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SkeletonHunter96 [2012-02-20 02:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Cool I was planning on Making a FMA OC soon XD

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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2012-02-20 03:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool xD maybe our ocs can be friends.

Btw does it look weird that I only outlined my oc or does it look ok?

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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 13:10:30 +0000 UTC]

I finished my OC [link]

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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 03:45:47 +0000 UTC]

I think it looks good and I recently got back into FMA today actually xD

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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2012-02-20 03:51:41 +0000 UTC]

cool xD I've been watching Brotherhood. I don't think I'll watch the first series since that is so different from the actual storyline e.e

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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 03:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Brotherhood Is Epic

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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2012-02-20 03:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Have you watched the first series?

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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 03:55:57 +0000 UTC]

I have watched both but Like BrotherHood better I love one opening from the first series over the rest along with Golden Time Lover of Brotherhood ^^ I am actually thinking of an Idea for an OC now xD

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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2012-02-20 04:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool x3

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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 04:57:43 +0000 UTC]

I am working on Character Design now too ^^

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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2012-02-20 04:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Yay~

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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 05:11:20 +0000 UTC]

I finished a design now but just have to come up with a name and Bio ^^

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Kikidrrr [2012-02-20 01:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice job.
Are you going to write a story to go with this picture or not really?

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albertxlailaxx In reply to Kikidrrr [2012-02-20 01:53:57 +0000 UTC]

An actual story? I doubt it. I'll be putting a storyline down with every pic though like I did with this one. But it won't be an actual story story. That'd take too much time and I'm far too lazy X3

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Kikidrrr In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 01:56:01 +0000 UTC]

True

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albertxlailaxx In reply to Kikidrrr [2012-02-20 03:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Btw does it look weird that I only outlined my oc or does it look ok?

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Kikidrrr In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-02-20 03:44:25 +0000 UTC]

It looks great

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