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I felt like drawing something rly sad D: Its Kureno holding his daughter who is really upset...At first I wasnt sure about the story line but I guess I'll stick to it....It's....really....really sad....and before anyone freaks NO Arisa does not die in my story....but I'm gonna be really mean....mmm....Anyway- when Aria is 3 years old, Arisa finds out shes pregnant again but by a horrible turn of events...Arisa gets a miscarriage. After Arisa is told at the hospital about this she goes into a really bad depression...kinda like how Kyoko Honda was when she lost Katsuya :*(Anyway, the depression becomes so bad that Arisa completly forgets about Aria and doesn't talk or play with her anymore. One day, Kureno finds out that Arisa cut herself really bad(on purpose. Aria tried to stop Arisa from doing it but like I said, Arisa totally forgets about Aria when she becomes depressed) and he takes her to the E.R.
After Arisa is token to the E.R. Kureno and Aria wait in the waiting room...and Aria breaks down and starts to cry saying she misses the old mommy she had that use to talk and play with her...and Aria also tells Kureno that she really wanted the baby Arisa WAS going to have but lost. Kureno starts to cry to because of all that has happened and so for the rest of the night, Kureno and Aria cry...together.
....TT~TT!!! I'M SORRY THE STORY LINE IS SO SAD!!!!! But don't worry!! Arisa comes out of the depression...eventually...
I won't write the WHOLE story right now...(I actually just came up with this story line while working on the drawing lol) so I'll just write the part where Aria breaks down and crys...prepare yourself...it'll make you cry...
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Doctor: Your wife is in critical condition, Mr Sohma. We're going to take her into surgery and try to do everything we can.
Kureno: Thank you Doctor. *takes Aria's hand* Come on baby, lets go sit in the waiting room.
~they go and sit in the waiting room
Kureno: Aria, they have toys over there if you want to play with them ^.^
Aria:....no thanks...*head is held down*
Kureno:...Are you ok, Aria?? *picks up Aria and sits her on lap*
Aria: No...Mama...she isn't the same....what happened to the old mama? Did she go somewhere? When is she coming back? Why doesn't mama talk to me anymore? Did I do something wrong..?
Kureno:....Aria....
Aria: I want her back, Daddy....*big tears form in her eyes*
I...I want things back to the way they use to be...I want mama to play wif me again...I want Mommy to hug me and kiss me goodnight....and....and I want my little sistew that mommy was gonna have...I want them both back daddy...please bring them back...Please....PLEASE! I WANT MOMMY BACK!!! *hugs onto her father tightly*
Kureno: *tears fall down his face* A-Aria....I'm sorry....Daddy's so sorry.....
Aria: *sobbing* W-WHY DID TIS HAPPEN?!!? DID I DO SOMETHING TO DESEAWVE THIS DADDY??? AM I BAD??? W-WHY DID BABY SISTEW HAVE TO DIE??? AND WHY WONT MOMMY LOOK AT ME ANYMOWE!! I'M USELESS NOW AWN'T I?? MOMMY DOESN'T LOVE ME ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kureno:*starts sobbing with Aria*....Ar-r-Aria.....*falls to his knees with Aria still wrapped around his neck*
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Original Base c) Clannad
This deviantion is the 2nd part to this one:[link]
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sydpiggy1 [2012-03-19 00:24:13 +0000 UTC]
AWW! LOOK WAT YOU'VE DONE!! I STARTED BALIING MY EYES OUT SO MY MOM THOUGHT I WAS DYING OR SICK OR IN PAIN!! HOW AM I GONNNA EXPLAIN THIS TO HER? (SHE'LL PROABLY THINK IMA WEIRDO! T^T )
(hehehe, srry bout the caps....STUPID PHONE I BLAME YOU!!! aww man, i did it again!! XD ) anyway...GREAT JOB!
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albertxlailaxx In reply to sydpiggy1 [2012-03-19 00:40:37 +0000 UTC]
Awww I'm so sorry I didn't think it was that emotional but I guess I was wrong.
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sydpiggy1 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-06-01 17:31:25 +0000 UTC]
lol, its ok, its ok! XD
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WillieManga [2012-03-03 19:20:39 +0000 UTC]
Kureno: It's not your fault, Aria...
Aria: Please come back, mommy... please come back... T-T
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loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 00:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Nooooooooo! I was crying till the very end!*sniff...... breaks down crying*
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albertxlailaxx In reply to loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 00:50:21 +0000 UTC]
O__O!! AHHH NUU DONT CRY D:!!!!! Dont cry! Dont cry, okay? Have a cookie!
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loneblueblossom In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-01-30 00:54:26 +0000 UTC]
hehehe!*sniff....takes cookie*
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albertxlailaxx In reply to loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 00:59:16 +0000 UTC]
^.^ Whose your favorite Fruits basket character?
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loneblueblossom In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-01-30 01:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh don't even get me started I have too many too list but if I had to chose one it would be Kyo!X3
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albertxlailaxx In reply to loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 03:01:33 +0000 UTC]
XDD I love him too! But Hatori-kun is my favorite
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loneblueblossom In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-01-30 16:28:23 +0000 UTC]
Hatori is pretty cool! Who's your favorite Furuba couple? I really like Kyo and Tohru!
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albertxlailaxx In reply to loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 16:31:13 +0000 UTC]
Kureno and Arisa all the way, but I love KyoxTohru too
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loneblueblossom In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-01-30 16:43:28 +0000 UTC]
I love Kureno and Arisa too! I just got Volume number 9 yesterday and didn't put it down! After I finished I always would go to the part where Arisa had lunch with Kureno and read it over and over again!It was so sweet!
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albertxlailaxx In reply to loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 17:36:05 +0000 UTC]
I have every FB volumn and both fan books XDD Vol 9 is on of my favorites. Not just because of the KurenoxArisa but because of how Kazuma stands up for Kyo x3
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loneblueblossom In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-01-30 17:45:41 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that was real sweet of Kazuma to stand up for Kyo!
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albertxlailaxx In reply to loneblueblossom [2011-01-30 17:51:38 +0000 UTC]
X3 I lurve Kazuma lol
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loneblueblossom In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-01-30 18:03:40 +0000 UTC]
Great minds think alike!
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Cheshire-Shadow [2010-07-01 10:53:38 +0000 UTC]
Am I heartless for thinking this is all entirely amusing?
I think it would look better written as prose rather than script, just because it helps stuff come across.
It's a sweet story, though. The drawing looks good.
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Cheshire-Shadow [2010-07-01 15:08:21 +0000 UTC]
I usally write it as a story but when I dont feel like writing the whole story right away I do a script. A lot of other ppl do it with their art too
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UchihaSakura1989 [2010-06-30 20:17:56 +0000 UTC]
that sounds really sad, i hope they have a happy ending.
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MachanicArtist96 [2010-06-29 04:59:08 +0000 UTC]
*Gasps* O.O! poor Aria...... I love the story line ^.^! very very good! ^.- keep it up~
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MachanicArtist96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2010-06-29 16:06:08 +0000 UTC]
^.^ Arisa is one of my fave characters, I made my own oc and she`s a yankee like arisa. lol
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Mydne [2010-06-29 04:57:51 +0000 UTC]
So... *sob* beautiful! You did a great job on the emotions in this!
Your request is going to be a little slow, my laptop broke and that is what I used to draw with
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Mydne [2010-06-29 12:23:58 +0000 UTC]
Aw thats otay X3 I don't mind waiting
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