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AlBorlen — Kalila Commission
Published: 2009-09-17 03:49:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2146; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 221
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Another commission for the very talented This is Kalila, a new character in his stories. If she piques your interest check out his work, I promise you'll enjoy it
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The hell? Sorry I took so long to critique, it's been a long, LONG week, lots of stuff, you get the idea.
Anyways, this isn't bad. It fits your style, and while I've got to admit that it looks nothing like I imagined her, I'm doing this for perspectives, and I like your perspective!
To tell you the honest truth, especially since you haven't seen any references of her, aside from one picture, this fits her fairly abrasive personality pretty well. Big, and somewhat angry looking...Maybe a little buff too, if you've read up to the sparring scene.
I like the designs you gave her on the robe though, it fits the setting pretty well, but I also like the outfit she's wearing underneath. The flowers really add a lot to it too, they were a really nice touch....
But I also like the outfit you gave her underneath too. It's a good foreshadowing of things to come, when she opens up a bit as a person too...
Her eyes came out a little bit bigger then I was expecting, honestly, and she DOES look quite a bit bigger and taller then I was expecting, but like I said before, perspectives.
But as usual, your work is incredibly bright, and very easy on the eyes. You're getting really damn good with detail, too...
All in all, I'd say it came out pretty good! Can't wait to see more!
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Hey, Thanks for the critique
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It's no problem, that's one of the funnest things is to see how people draw them 
And there shall be more coming! When I get back from LA, that is.
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Thank you, I kinda just played around with the eyes and that's what happened
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I have to say, I love the colors.
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Thank you
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Very talented? Thank you, I like that!
And this is interesting, I've got to say. It's a totally different perspective of her then I was expecting, but that's not a bad thing!
Expect a critique tonight or tomorrow
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Haha well thanks, hopefully as she becomes more defined and you get some more works of her she will be as recognizable as your other OC's
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Wow...Sounds fun? lol. And I hope she does too!
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