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Alex-namn — Alex's Ruby Nuzlocke Part 43
Published: 2015-05-31 18:58:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 9152; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 0
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Oh it feels more sad when I see now that i had Angry at lv 6 -30... RIP Angry...
And Erik And Bucket have this conversation again, sound just like the other one. And it made Erik to start to remember something that he really want to forget... And what's happening there in the end?
And also if you see something error then tell me (And it's probably a lot so you don't have to look after it...!)
And the idea of Erik background story, I got the help from
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UGU! THE FEELS BE REAL!
And... those sandals... Zinnia?!
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Bruh... Dis make a me crey...
Hmmm... No clue who that is... Like the Duskull though. I like the Duskull line.
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And you don't know who it is! But kind of a important charakter (not soo important actually... but important 
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Then I shall wait and see...
Wait, you've got a lot of stuff planned... This'll take a while...
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Well, you have a lot of work, BUT you should take some to relax and just WING it.
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BUTT I will not relax tooo much
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Aww...actually seeing this in a comic makes me wanna cry...;-;
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CRYING
OK FIRST ANGRY DIE
NOW THIS
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH FEELS ALEX?
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I'm so sorry!!! But next part woun't be sad! I'm prommes (I Think?)
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Colonel Sanders division of chicken acquisition strikes again!
Well....my deconstruction of Erik did hit on a traumatic event, I just didn't dig deep enough. As for the whole back story, it's tragic and all, but it's not all that natural. Erik didn't get protective until the bonus after part 21, and officially starting at part 22. I don't know, I guess Alex getting poisoned was the spark that lit the fuse to Erik's long buried past, but I guess this works.
Anyway I'm going to sleep, will continue conversation when my brain is firing better. XD
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This is the problem... I didn't have a plot when I'm started my Nuzlocke comic, it started, well around 20 I think...? and I have to make it go hand in hand, and that's not easy
Haha good night
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I'm back!
You really must love flying by the seat of your pants. At least you are gaining experience for your future endeavors, and I'm sure you'll have your next project planed out.
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Hahaha learning by doing!!! From now on I have most of everything planned!
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Well at least you're learning, I just kinda wish things would grow organically, instead of being shoehorned in. And I mean no disrespect by this, but you're basically using cheap drama to draw emotion. Unless you don't have a beating heat, it's impossible not to be sad at that scene, especially if you have younger siblings like I do. It's cheap though, because this is the first time in over forty pages we are hearing about this, and it's impossible not to have a reaction to that story. It was powerful, but it would have been more so, if you had foreshadowed it. Maybe a throw away line, or Erik looking meaningfully at something that belonged to his sister. Or anything that would have let us know she existed, instead of blindsiding us with this revelation. Again I am not trying to be a prick, I'm just letting you know how you can make it better in the future. I respect you, that's why I want to help you.
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Oh yeah you have absolutely right! i could have done more connection between Eric and his meeting with Team Magma (Specially the first meeting!) And something that showed more of his sister somehow, so it doesn't look like she just existed in this part. But it's that with the no planning from the beginning and no experience. But next time! And thank you I appreciate a lot for you help and ideas, it helps much!!!
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It's just something to keep in mind for the future. Things are more powerful, when they grow organically from the situations you create. That's not to say you can't improvise now and then, but it's better to have drafts, and outline your ideas in writing. Like I said, this would have resonated so much more with your audience, if you foreshadowed. And you're welcome, I'm glad you didn't get defensive like others would have.
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Oh but writing thing is not my strongest side! Like my notes!!!! They are so bad that not even my dog would eat it even if it was something that she really like!!! And there have I also learning by failing! 
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Writing is a pain in the ass, but it requires a solid planning, and detailed notes. This isn't like war where the first casualty is the battle plan, and you make stuff up as you go. Writing requires thoughtful plans, outlines, and a solid blueprint as to where the story will progress. That's why your write multiple drafts, because you might not be satisfied with the first few drafts you write, but there may be elements you like from said drafts, and you can use them to compile your story. That's why writing is a pain, because it does eat a lot of time. Unfortunately it's a necessary evil, because you need it to get your ideas across properly.
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Yes you're so right.... But my next Nuzlocke note gonna be legendary
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There you go, you're already on your way.
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That explains so much omg... Poor Erik! Perhaps now at least there'll be more understanding between the two of them Q^Q
Their expressions are all so full of emotion as well, amazing page as per usual ;v;
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Yes your right. probably there'll be more understanding between the two of them now 
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Ahhh, hopefully they'll be able to sort themselves out soon ;^; i really feel sorry for Mark omg, the poor bugger's always the scapegoat :')
You're welcome ;v;
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and it's must be hard for Mark when they talking in pokemon language
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Ooh i forget sometimes that not everyone can understand the Pokemon 
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Haha yeah and special in this moment...!
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everyone start to hug Erik now!
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Yep. Athena is now sorry.
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