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Alex-namn — Alex's Ruby Nuzlocke Part 50
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Published: 2016-11-22 23:34:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 8171; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 0
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Well... I hope I didn't make you too depressing from this page...
The first half of this part was actually planned on be one the previously part, but it would just destroyed the lovely moment there...
Because of the miserable I put you through in this part I can at least say what the next part will be about some backstories from Mark
So little about this part, Oh what I hate water!!! and I have had so much in the way, like being sick and went to Norway...And much technology problems! So this took a little time to finish!
But now it's here and I hope you enjoy... ehh... I mean... it's my 50th part... Yay!!!
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man i pity mark right now. the concussion headache is going to be insufferable.
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Nooo cuteeey!!
I thought Water type are resistant to steel type
is this why she is never evolved? (
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Omg that's so true! >XD
(and it's was just me who didn't like the evolution Pelippipper... So that's why I didn't evolve her... I did this Nuz almos 4 years ago... I would definitely make it different if I did it now...
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We gonna miss you very very much!...
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Well from here it can't be worse, right...
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Weeeeeeeh! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Noooo, Cutey! But....but...nooooo 
That's it, I'm starting a new Ruby save file right now, Courtney is going down!
And your "next" button its broken... *Clicks profusely* I want more...nooooow ^_^
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it didn't get enough with Cutie death... We have now a really depressing sad Jennifer
That sounds like a great idea! >: (
Haha I'm working on the next part! but it will come somewere next week!
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Shit is hitting the fan and for once it wasn't Frostbite.
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I saw the Klefkey (or however ya spell it) in panel 10! Cool :3
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Someone have lost their Pkemon keys (and I also have no idea how to it spells
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She will be in really big trouble!!!
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That was a really cool video~
and yes...
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Oh gosh! That escalated quickly! Awesome! Can't wait to see how this plays out!
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Yes it really did
And so do I >:3
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Someone recently asked if he should emulate your content style to generate stronger emotion in his own comic, and that started getting me thinking about this page and I felt I might as well share my anyalysis:
Your nuzlocke, including this page, is enjoyable and entertaining on a number of levels. That said, using this page (50) as an example, you could easily be divided into two pages to ease your workload, and still have the same emotional impact.
Actually, one could argue that ending the page right when Alex is pulled from the water, and starting the next one at Curly's funeral, would actually create a more powerful impact. Doing so would force the reader to linger on the death of another important character (specifically how they died). This would also give greater focus on Max's familial relationship since it would then have it's own page.
There would be no need to create additional panels or dialogue; just cut it in half. Or keep it the way it is; like I said, the comic is still enjoyable regardless and I'm just sharing my thoughts.
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I'm really thankful for your thoughts, and you have absolutely right!
The first part of this page were supposed to be in the previously part, but it would totally destroy the moment in it... and it would be way to long! And that's a big problem I have, they all becomes longer than what they are supposed to be. And I just want to getting forward as fast as possible.
But I should really end the part with Cuties death and let that sink in before next disaster, and then work more on the next part there it was more about Mark, yes. And it would be a nice transition to the two upcoming parts too.
I will definitely think of this much more now! That I don't have to hurry through everything. Thank you so much!
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Oh my gosh... I...
...they didn't even die in battle...
I'm so sorry, Alex... *Seriously crying right now*
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Hehehe
My notes of my Nuzlocke run wasn't so good... Don't know who and where they died. So I have to improvise
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But that's SO SAD...
Alex... do you need a hug? I know that I do...
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Yes... Let's give eachother a big hug!
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Me Yes new part
after new part ...
no one come in I will be in my glass case of emotion
*muffled voice* Why to much is happen what did we do to deserve this
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Hahah I'm so sorry
And you all started to feel too much loving and happy!... I have to do something!
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I should have suspected it cause when was about to go asleep this is many days back my mind was thinking like wait a minute ONE of Alex Pokémon Cutey is alone I sense a death flag but I just went nah that too out there
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Yeah you can really feel that something bad is probably going to hapend in the previously part
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Me: Yay! New page!
*Cutie dies
Many minutes later...
Me: Okay... Finished crying. Things are messed up... It'll be okay... They're going to avenge Cutie and hopefully Courtney will die in a ditch...
*"I've decided to join Team Magma."
Me: NOOOOOO! Mark! SNAP HER OUT OF IT!
*Mark is kidnapped by a psychopath of a sister.
Me:...-grabs all the deadliest things in the Pokemon world (yes this includes Athena)- -points to Courtney- There. There is your target. Kill no one else, and then you can go back home with a bunch of food.
Athena: Can I blow her up?
Me: Sure.
Athena: YAAAAAAAY!
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Hahah when you thought the worst were over it just come one new
but it's nice to have you on our side! Haha blowing up Courtney!!!
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Erik! You are no longer the target!
You're doing a great job by the way! Keep up the good work!
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If Erik isn't the target anymore... Oh this is serious!
Thank you
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OH finaly, NOWW lets see the newwwwwww chapter!!!
*After watching*
*''I decided to join team magma.''
*Cutie is dead.
*Alex's husband is kidnapped by his yandere sister.
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BOY
Its a good day to drink Bleach.
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Yeah this part where probably not what everyone expected... ^^'
Hahaha and please don't drink bleach
(Haha super cute with "Alex's husband"~ :3 )
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Wat DA fuck Alex don't you dare make anyone of your Pokemon die not even nark I hope Courtney dies
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Ok... I will try... I'm so sorry
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You're so good at tugging at the heartstrings ;A;
The worst part was Jennifer crying all alone ;A; ;A; ;A;
Erik and Mark having a moment is like a ray of sunlight in this whole disaster! ;v; It gives me hope that everything will be okay, but it looks like there will be many struggles and epic adventures until then~
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Haha it become much at just in one page
Yeees... For her it's like to lost her mother...!
Yay finally a shimmer of hope!~ Destroy it!!!
...and yes it will be many struggles and epic adventures until then!... >;3
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This didn't end well!!! O__O
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