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Lina-I [2017-10-16 18:16:41 +0000 UTC]

It is good, the whole chapter. There are few problems thou. I know it is really hard to fit all the dialogue to the bubbles, but it is hard to read sometimes. The longer texts are getting jumbled. I had that problem with translating the fanfiction to manga myself. I solved it by making more pages and making the dialogue simple and direct. There is still lot that gets lost in the translation. I try to tell the story thru pictures as well as the text.

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loin323 [2017-10-13 20:43:18 +0000 UTC]

in frame 9 that's below the frame with the dojo on it ranma repeats herself in the same speech bubble

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