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AlexLive97 β The Birth of the Hunter: Part 1 (Monster Universe)
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Published: 2017-05-09 16:32:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3469; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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Quick Silver is now telling us the story that made him who he was. Hope ya'll enjoy. It feels weird to see Silver so... Scarless.ΒThe comic that lead up to Quick Silver telling his story:Β
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I am no longer interested in Pony stuff. So I am unfortunally no longer interested in continuing these mlp comics.Β
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hmm, I had no idea your OC was a thug. well, the more you know!
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Who? Quicksilver? I wouldn't call him a thug, he just lives in a harsh envierment. :c
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what? no! silly person... your OC 's shadow is at the blacksmiths (when the said thugs get things repaired)
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Ohhhhhhh.... Well thugs doesn't mean whoever is in the picture, it was more meant as those who are.
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Panel 4: "due to that" can be replaced with "because"
Panel 5: "good" reputation and "payed" is actually spelled as "paid"
Panel 7: "wealth" is missing an 'e'
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Thanks, I will fix it.
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I don't know why but I have a feeling that Black Gold is the villain of this story.
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ya know, if you changed Black Gold's name to "Red Gold"....I would love you for life
"I guess he maybe loved my mother..."
whoa....that...would be a REALLY bad love triangle
"...he felt threatened by our wealth and popularity..."
the FCK do you mean? You found the fcking town so you get most of the popularity!...maybe!...and you found the fcking town so your wealthy cuz they had to pay taxes!....maybe!....
this was a nice page to read Alex....CZ IT WAS FINALLY A PAGE TO HIS PAST! I was wondering when you were going to tell us HOW he got his eye scar....or HOW he met his former crush....or HOW the person who took the photo didn't warn them about the monster in the background.....wow....I have a lotΒ of how questions....
..."Fire Salt"....that's a real thing?
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I don't know why. Is it because it would be a reference to something? 
And Fire salt is a little reference to a game called Skyrim. There is this side quest where you gotta help a blacksmith by getting him Firesalts.
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ooooohhhh....yeah that makes a lot more sense....... I need to learn about some of these video games, I mean, I don't need to play them but I need to learn about some of them
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the father of Quick Silver is look like Thor in pony versiΓ³n XD
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If Thor was blond. Which he isn't. I don't count Marvel Thor because He's no real thor. I follow real Thor. And Real thor is a ginger. XP
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back story! whoooh!
also its wealth, not walth ^^
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Cool beginning to this comic! But in the last panel, you misspelled wealth as "walth".
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Got it, fixed it, thanks. c:
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That cool that we are going to Quicksilver story and Mirk town. Their family have a reputation in this town and Black Gold will probably ended it in the next 3 or 4 parts in the story.
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