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Published: 2015-05-13 13:23:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1424; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Hey Guys! I need Your help in english grammar, I have two poems of Zecora:My friend, press down at platform
To falling down. Be like storm!
or
My friend, press down when on platform
to fall from there. Be like a storm!
Please help with errors in grammar ! Thanks! \^_^/ What better phrase ?
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Comments: 7
How about:
"My friend, if falling you wish to perform,
press down upon this platform."
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Maldrete, Thank You so much! Cool idea!
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You're welcome. I'm glad you liked the idea.
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Exquisite. Makings of a great 2D platformer. Well done /)
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Thank You so much for Your support! ^_^
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Hate to sound like a know-it-all, but the proper poem would be:
"My friend, press down when on a platform
To fall from there. Be like a storm!"
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