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Published: 2016-03-31 06:41:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 461; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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I don't know if I should call this Cyborg, or Prototype version one.A quick drawing last midnight. I've caught heavy flu, so I couldn't draw too much.
I wonder what happened to my browsers. Always a glitch whenever I tried to access some websites.
Media: A4 drawing paper.
Tools: 2B Graphite pencil, erasers, and brushes for the background.
Note updated 2016.04.16:
BTW, I was planning to make the Cyborg metallic. But, because I planned to make the surrounding area a bit smokey, I wasn't sure if I should make the Cyborg a little shiny or just rusty / dull one.
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I always have anatomy, proportion & shading issues. I feel the left parts of the figure (from left shoulder to the left foot below) look a bit weird. And I need feedback for the shading, have I applied too much shading on it?
Thanks a lot for all feedback and correction.
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Comments: 2
Hello, fellow Improvement-Club member. ^^
Overall, I think the anatomy looks fine. You've managed to find the right balance between rigid (robot) and fluid (human). But if I were to nitpick, the shoulder seems off to me. I think that is mainly due to the shading on the ball joint there. As for shading, I find it waaaaaay too light and lacking contrast. (But I'm into high contrast, so that makes me biased. >_< ) Anyway, here's some suggestions: meekochan.deviantart.com/art/a… (After I uploaded the file, I realized it's probably not the feedback you're looking for. *sweatdrop* Sorry if that's the case.)
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Hello, Meekochan. ^^
I have visited your suggestion link.
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback and suggestion. You have pointed out the problems that I missed.
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