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Alexx-C — Sci-Fi Comic Page 2
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Published: 2015-01-02 16:58:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 5892; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 287
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Here is the second page of my sexy sci-fi comic, where the hero character drops in the guards, and the fighting action begins. I have the other pages just about finished, then I just need to think of a title for the project and make a cover page.page one
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Comments: 13
Aw yeah! A good fight scene with all kinds of limbs thrashing and punches flying. Smart move, taking out the best fighter first.
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Me too! I hope I can get it to that stage at some point
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Panel 5, I think it should be 'You' rather then 'Your'
Unless she has an accent, but from her other text it doesn't appear so.
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Ops! Thanks, I updated the image
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Wow, your art is realy great. Most of all , I love the faces of your characters!
If you keep on doing Comics I suggest a little bit less text. Some exclamations ("gast", "ugh", "what is the meaning...") are a bit redundant I think.
I'm looking forward to see the next part!
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Hey, thanks for the feedback, you have a good point about some of the dialogue, a lot of it is just filler.
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you have a good graphic to process in comic page creation, well done
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