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Published: 2013-06-11 15:30:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 8826; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 21
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"OH-OH... problems..."[help with grammar please!
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YouΒ΄re comics are getting awesomemer everytime, my friend
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well at least Starscream didn't get yelled at in the Main Control Room and beating up by Megatron
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Grammar looks good on this!
It's understandable, and the audience can clearly get an idea of what Starscream means.
Well done drawings and english!
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OoOoOoOo....that does not bode well for the human....... XD
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OOOOOH!!! THANK U! I don't know what I would do without all you! I LOVE THEM!
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* It appears that our doctor hasn't survived the unfortunate incident...
* STARSCREAM! Return immediately We found a signal from Knockout!
Corrections are in bold C:
BTW, I love the comic! Your art skills are insanely amazing!!!
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"if soundwave hasn't found him safe, he's already dead. How do I say this...?" *survived in the next panel, and the next one, change returns to return. And change find to found.
Really cool artwork on this page! I can't draw starscream at all, so good job!
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Ah, Starscream looks so funny with that expression!
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