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AlisTori — Spy Beat Extra 12 eng
Published: 2012-05-31 10:26:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1430; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 20
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Comments: 8
Grammar:
Freeze! Little Rogue!
Better:
Freeze YOU little rogue!
- the you makes the sentence sound less awkward
Police will be here in a minute
Better:
THE police will be....
- adding the "the" makes the sentence sound better
But first we need to finish one business
But first we need to finish SOME business
- the "one" makes the sentence sound awkward
I hope this helps again.
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FINALLY! AT LAST! We have corrected this page 
Thank you for pointing on our mistakes!
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Nice work, that girl is getting annoying hah.
Keep it up!
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She is just yelling at the girl who is trying to help her
But she is an interesting character though
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well that's in her way of acting! she's egoistical a little and always wants to get what she wants and quickly ))) but she also has the advantages though )
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