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okay.. so i realized i messed up with my skill points, i have 26 and a warrior is only supposed to have up to 20, so i will re-post her skill points here. sorry.
Defence: 4
Speed: 4
Endurance: 4
Tactical skills: 3
attack: 5
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name: Flamewhisp
Past Names: Flamekit, Flamepaw.
Age: 22 moons
Clan: Airclan
Sex: Female
Orientation: Straight, only looking for a male mate.
Rank: Warrior
Apprentice: current; none past; none
PERSONALITY: {Curious|Adventurous|Gentle/Kind|Unique|Wise}
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
DESCRIPTION/APPEARANCE:
Flamewhisp is a decent sized She-cat, but she is shorter than some she cats. She has bright, flame-colored fur with some white splashes and darker orange fur on her ears and back paws. She has bright crystal blue eyes that reflect her emotions. She has two small fall colored leaves in her fur behind her ear.
HISTORY:
Kit:
Flamekit was born into the clan with her brother Falconkit. Flamekit's mother, Mintfur, was very kind and gentle, she taught Flamekit to always give respect to every living creature, weather it was a cat or not. She looked up to her mother and took every word her mother said to heart. Her father Sunheart was a loyal warrior and very strong, he taught Flamekit and her brother how to be brave and follow their own paths no matter what anyone else says. Falconkit was Flamekits brother and best friend, she always played with him and they shared similar personalities. She would always spend her time around her brother and they stuck up for each other.
Apprentice:
When Flamekit's apprentice ceramony came around she stood proudly beside her brother as they were given mentors. Flamepaw stepped forward with wide eyes as she touched noses with a large gray tom named Blanksky. Flamepaw learned everything she could from her mentor and admired him. She often had training sessions with her brother and they always had a lot of fun learning together. As they got older, Flamepaw grew closer and closer to her brother Falconpaw, they had an unbreakable bond with each other.
Warrior:
Flamepaw felt happiness over whealm her when she was given her warrior name, Flamewhisp, "whisp" standing for her curious and mysterious personality. Her brother was given the name Falconclaw for his strength and bravery. Once Flamepaw became a warrior she spent her time trying to help her clan in every way. She often took her brother with her to fetch moss for the elders and kits and to gather herbs for the medicine cats. One day when she was walking through the forest with her brother they came across a rogue in the territory. Her brother ordered Flamewhisp to come in from one side while he came from another, but the loner caught their scent and took off. Falconclaw followed after quickly with Flamewhisp following close behind. They chased the tom to the edge of the territory and Falconclaw dashed after the tom as they crossed the clan border, and without giving it to much thought Flamewhisp followed her brother. Suddenly the soft grass turned into a hard stone surface and before Flamewhisp knew it she found herself on the thunderpath. She quickly came to a halt and watched as her brother continued the chase, "Falconclaw!?" she shouted after him. Her brother stopped and turned his gaze to his sister. Flamewhisp tilted her head in confusion as Falconclaws eyes stretched wide in fear, she followed his gaze and she felt her heart stop as she noticed a large creature hurling toward her. She froze in shock, barely able to hear the desperate calls from her brother. She closed her eyes tight and braced herself for the impact.... suddenly she felt a force slam into her side and she was sent flying to the side...
FAMILY/RELATIONS:
Father: Sunheart
Mother: Mintfur
Siblings: Falconclaw
Mate: none
Kits: none
RELATIONSHIPS:
Sunheart:
Sunheart was Flamewhisp's loving father, she got he strength and bravery from him and he taught he many different things, including how to be herself.
Mintfur:
Mintfur was a kind and gentle she cat. She raised Flamewhisp to be gentle,kind, and taught her about the wonders of life.
Falconclaw:
Falconclaw was Flamewhisps brother and best friend. She often spent alot of time with him and they would go on patrols together.
ROLE-PLAY EXAMPLES:
taken from a roleplay with: Snowstorm12
Lynxpaw groaned inwardly as he stood up and shook out his ruffled damp fur. He perked his ears and tried to listen, but he couldn't hear anything over the loud roar of rain and the howling wind. His gaze shifted around the den, drops of water where leaking in in multiple areas.
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Comments: 4
Sparrow-puff [2013-10-12 08:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Just popping in to tell you have too many skill points for your rank. you have 26 skill points, yet a warrior is only allowed a limit of 20.
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Ally-cat-art In reply to Sparrow-puff [2013-10-12 14:46:07 +0000 UTC]
yeah... i only realized that after i posted it but i didn't want to have to go and fix it on the drawing because it would be sorta a long process and such... do you think it would be okay if i said in the description that i messed up and then put down the amount of skill points she should have??
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Sparrow-puff In reply to Ally-cat-art [2013-10-12 14:52:03 +0000 UTC]
That would be fine ^3^ (I do it all the time XD haha.)
I believe that Whitey is making a new reference anyway so all members will be updating sooner or later
But yes, if you just write that is is wrong and put the correct amount, that'll be fine ^^
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