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Published: 2009-04-23 10:58:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2935; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 43
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Owned xP
Thanks for the idea, ~Solarlink x)

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[Owned xP
Merci pour l'idée, ~Solarlink x)]

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Comments: 17

Steph1254 [2010-02-07 16:10:02 +0000 UTC]

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When I saw this in my inbox I instantly thought it was adorable, the poor little guy! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g… " width="17" height="15" alt="" title="Giggle - "/>

I love the way you've added the little grey lines to emphasise the flying, and his facial expression fits the situation really well. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/>

I also saw a couple of things that maybe could be edited or added a little to make this emote even better than it is now.

The first thing would be to maybe make the emote get up and walk behind the wall, with the wall maybe going out of the frame too, having a slight delay and then making the emote loop into the flying frames. That way it would add a bit more of a loop to the emote, rather than having him slide down and then restart. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/>

The next thing would be to maybe mess with the wall a little when he hits it. Maybe make the wall shake a little, and add tiny cracks when the emote hits it. That way it'll make the bang look a lot more powerful! It's not crucial, though, just a suggestion. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g… " width="17" height="15" alt="" title="Giggle - "/>

Overall I think this is a really great emote with a smooth animation and a humorous story, keep up the great work!

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Almarane In reply to Steph1254 [2010-02-08 11:23:14 +0000 UTC]

I did a new version. Hope you like it better ^^
[link]

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Diesel-McCool In reply to Steph1254 [2010-02-07 18:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Great review, Steph.

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Almarane In reply to Steph1254 [2010-02-07 17:35:26 +0000 UTC]

Awh, thank you very much =3
Well, I'll try to do a new version with what you told ^^ But I don't know what to put after he has walked behind the wall =/
Thanks again ^^

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Tigerstorm97 [2010-02-07 18:38:36 +0000 UTC]

so cute

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Almarane In reply to Tigerstorm97 [2010-02-07 19:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Tigerstorm97 In reply to Almarane [2010-02-07 19:51:41 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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Shiraime [2009-04-25 08:54:16 +0000 UTC]

MDR culte !

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Almarane In reply to Shiraime [2009-04-28 16:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Héhé xP

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Erafine [2009-04-24 15:47:28 +0000 UTC]

OMG 0o0 j'adore XDD

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Almarane In reply to Erafine [2009-04-24 16:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Merci XD

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Naura-nocta [2009-04-23 16:32:53 +0000 UTC]

xD paivre bonhomme qui se prend le mur!

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Almarane In reply to Naura-nocta [2009-04-23 20:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Héhé xP

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Lucie-P [2009-04-23 10:58:51 +0000 UTC]

mdrr!
c'est toi qui les fait tous ces émoticones ? =O

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Almarane In reply to Lucie-P [2009-04-23 11:10:54 +0000 UTC]

oui

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Lucie-P In reply to Almarane [2009-04-23 11:12:08 +0000 UTC]

waah trop bien fait ! ^^

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Almarane In reply to Lucie-P [2009-04-23 11:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Merci ^^

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