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Published: 2013-08-28 02:06:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1005; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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I PUT A CRITIQUE THING ON HERE NOW, I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE A BIT OF CRITIQUE! JUST NO CRITIQUE ON THE BACKGROUND BECAUSE I DIDN'T DRAW IT!For some reason, I got the idea of this drawing from the song Distorted by Cirque Du Soleil <33
I love how this came out! cx
okay I never realized how much I hated coloring Evangeline until now-
this is really supposed to be whenever she first discovered she could use psychic powers-
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Alright! This is actually my first critique on something, so sorry if I am kinda bad at it. Also, sorry if I accidentally hurt your feelings or make you upset in any way, I will try my best not to! Okay.. um. To the drawing.
I really do love this a lot. I will start with her body. The colors are really well done and look blended and smooth. Although I must address shading. I know you hate it, but I must do it. XD
Okay! I think that the shading needs to be a little more intense. Because the little orb of light there looks to be pretty bright. So that whole side of her body should be lit up because of it, with a tiny shade of purple over it. I would also make the back outline of her a little bit darker, just to show how bright it is.
Okay, a bit more anatomy. The anatomy to this is just amazing! The legs look perfect and the head is the right size. The only thing I can say that is a bit off would be the forearms and hands. The forearms should be a bit longer and the elbow moves back a bit. I would also make the hands a tad bit bigger. That is really the only negative thing I would say about it. I just love the the collarbone, And her facial expression is perfect. It gives us a feel on how she felt during that time.
Finally, I must address the hair. Although I love the style in which you made it, I have a small issue. The way her hair appears to be moving. I would not think that there would be wind in a cave. The only thing I can think of is the orb that would cause some wind like that. Because if so I would of added some movement in her fur as well.
Sorry if you feel like I am just pointing out the bad things- I really do love it! The lines are smooth and her pelt is beautiful. The anatomy is amazing, and I know I already mentioned her facial expression. The whole picture itself gives us that feeling, just as if we were her in that situation. The emotion brings it all together.
Ah, well. That is all I have to say really. Sorry for any grammatical or spelling mistakes, this Kindle is hard to type on. I hope this helps a bit.. if not.. Sorry. XD
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Hhh, thank you so much. <3 It was helpful~
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No problem~ c: I am glad it helped.
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This looks absolutely beautiful.
WAT HAV U BEN DOOING
U IMPROOVED SU MUCH
It really is an improvement, and some amazing work! I love the effects of the purple light c:
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N'aw, thank you. ;a; <333
And the little hot pink light was actually just an effect programmed into Gimp. I was going to use a tutorial on psychic-like light, but it didn't come out so well because it was a Paint Tool SAI tutorial so I just gave up and used one of the programmed stuff. xD
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Well it came out wonderful.
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Thanks. I love the background to ;w;
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hnng fine
And thanks<333
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