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Published: 2002-03-05 23:21:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1425; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 161
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machine.nati on.v.2here it is! v.2 of Machine Nation. I worked for about 3 hours on adding more machinery, even though it wasn't that much. I put more stages, which are adding the skin mesh onto the robots. I still have to add more machinery to the assembly robots, but that will be in v3. I first wanted everybody's opinion on the work I did for this version.
THANK YOU! to everybody who commented on v.1 I really appreciated it. I hope you like this on even more.
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Comments: 21
most impressive, and a damned nice idea too. Reminds me of those car adverts... hehe
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wow, almost looks real, hun.
very busy and prophetic. me loves.
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wow that looks like you've been workin for hours on it... absolutly amazing !
keep it on !
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rofl... thats amazing... a great idea and good execution... very nice... i like the shadows and the lighting... great job
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this has an awesome feel to it, but then so does most of your stuff i especially like the shadows and that nothing else is visible on the floor/area except the machine. great work, keep it up!
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heh, I love the idea and the colors, but the textures and general modeling of the people seem a bit lacking. It's still a very cool piece though!
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-mage
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You should make a more detailed "person", other then that it looks very good
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yes yes this is better than the first one. i like it a lot. i like the not-too-complex models you used here. makes it look like a toy factory
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well done! ItΒ΄s almost like a play on a stage, according to the chosen light enviroment.
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wow, i really dig this rotated view as opposed to the other render... thjis is lookin' really fresh'- love the reflections off the floor
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~higgs aka jon
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i love the textures so much....especially the floor
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hmmmm
there's some things i like and things i don't.
Like:
The Overall idea
The color scheme so far, but it could use a bit more texturing for sure.
Dislike:
The models look very thrown together, and are obviously sphere primitives put together.
It's obvious that each little section of robot arms is adding something to the characters, but there's no effects or activity to accompany it, so it looks very static.
As far as the construction of the arms, they seem basic and there are no obvious places where moving parts would be.
Overall:
Add more complexity to your characters and the scene, look for some tut's on subdivision (box) modelling and that sort of thing, get that shit meaty
Once you have it all set up as far as each object goes
get some mapping coordinates on them and put some GOOD metal materials on 'em
a little wear on the texture, some bump mapping, a little spec mapping etc.
Good luck
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Kinda reminds me of the smile factory. Very nice, everything looks great
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pimp ass hsit nice job
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up..
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awesome work - the thumbnail looks like a spine which caught my eye at first. the only thing i might change would be to make the top hoses a bit more random - it may not work - but i'd be curious to see how it looked
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you, sir, are brilliant. great update, and i cant wait for v3
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