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Published: 2013-04-04 12:22:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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But thou deceived me,
As thou did see me.
And she came and she went,
And she stayed and she bade.
But up there forever and in between,
She showed how she saved me.
And showed how she made me.
And where this happened.
How this happened,
Is now beside me,
And does not mar me.
Because she does not know me,
And she shall not fear me.
But if thee should leave me,
I shall destroy thee.
For thou hath deceived me,
And thou woulds't destroy me,
If I allow thee,
The chance to.
A.L.R.tist
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ALRtist In reply to TimeAgentZen [2013-04-05 02:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, i haven't received much positive feedback on this one.. well rather, I haven't really received ANY feedback on this one in the past... I was actually briefly debating whether it was worth putting up. But I still wrote it and I still like it so, I put it up because that would be selfish to the poem if i were to leave it out!
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TimeAgentZen In reply to ALRtist [2013-04-09 05:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Agreed! I'm glad you put it up. It's good to all the different sides to your writing.
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