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Published: 2002-11-14 05:15:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 3011; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 253
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more tests... and my first trees.... done in the style of rivenRelated content
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Your tree leaves look fuzzy and soft >w<
I want to squeeze them 8D
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Veryu Riven-ish I love the MYst lands. ROCK ON! And Riven in style
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I hate YOu!!! That is so damn amazing. Keep it up.
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omg this is so awesome! I love this so much! +fav +fav absoloutly! I have a question for you. I am only 15. I havent had TOO much expirence with 3D graphics, but i've used a demo of vue d'esprit. (scenery) and i've used a few other basic programs. I am pretty good at photostudio also. maya looks very complicated. I might be getting it pretty soon. Will I be able to use it at all with my experience at all? Or will it totally just blow be away after i create a single object?
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overall its good, very nicely stylized, but my major gripe would be that you have mutiple sets of shadows, there doesn't seem to be one persistent light source. like the palm tree shadows are facing the house, yet the sun is behind the entire scene. textures are good, i love to see a shading network on them.
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Very tropical and nice! Everything fits together really well. Overall, this picture gives me a good feeling. I really like it! Great job!
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Hey. Thatβs cool. Is it Maya? The house looks like something from Exile or Myst. GREAT JOB!
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HMm I just realized I've never seen your gallery This one caught my eye. I have no idea how to do these kinds of things besides simple 3-D programs where you can make spheres and whatnot, so I am amazed by this. Must have taken awhile!
My only CC is that maybe the leaves color should be more subdued so they dont stand out so much from the BG. Other than that, wonderful
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love this piece at the first sight.
everything in so good details and the cloud looks so real.
all of this make me so impress!!
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Looks fine
Reminds me, in a way, of a monkey island element!
Very well done!
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ah so now the temple has a background..nice render...a few flaws that have been menioned but aside from that, NICE!
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Great render! That is actually the first thing I thought of when I saw this: Myst/Riven. Nice work, I really love it.
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the house rules but the environment could be a bit better i think..
it looks kinda amateuristic.. some stupid trees and stuff
don't get me wrong (i know you won't), i couldn't do it myself, but if you wanna end up like myst riven or excile (which i finished lately ) you should make everything as detailed as the house. More different textures and so on...
do you get my point?
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goddamn, never looked at your stuff thoroughly before but this is nice, such a nice soft feel to it, see now what p9 was talking about
kickass work
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The palm trees look too cartoonish and light for a setting with realistic stones and a funky temple, work on those, otherwise - ownage.
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really nice man!
itΒ΄s a pleasure lookin at it
i only think that the leaves couldΒ΄ve been slightly darker and less saturated so they dun look like self-illumination or how thatΒ΄s decribed properly
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RIven is cool
Wood is GRey....
err it's mmmm brown yeah yeha
needs bettes bump mapping
=9
The temple itself is nice. Also the leaves part
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I wanted to mention also that it looks so real. It seems like a paradise, so calm and beautiful...i it!
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Simply Amazing... +devwatch....you have some excellent work!
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sweet.. you've got something great going!
I agree about the "leaves". Desatured and darkening them will add some realism.
Another thing that bothers me is the "tree" next to the temple. It's trunk looks like a stone (it's too thick).
I really like the little details in the temple.. what about adding more? Some ornaments etc?
The rock's are too shiny too me. They look like the've been coated. If you meant them to be wet.. well I don't think they would stay wet in such a sunny day.
What about adding some PaintEffects magic? Some little stones / grass etc on the ground.
The lightning is pretty off.. but I guess it's temporal?
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Cool, like them thar palm trees! looks well good
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great work! maybe the leaves could use a little bit of work, but other than that, it's great.
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awesome. its very cute. feeels like inside a 3d cartoon game!
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frickin' sweet. I love the colours you have used!
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altermind's temple
great work I really like it and the textures are superb!
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Sweetness, it looks like something off of Riven for sure. That was my first impression. I'd suggest giving it your own flare to get away from the Rivenized look..
Trees, they'd look a lil better if the leaves were a darker hue of green, imho.
Keep up the good work
--Jim---
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That's great..
reminds me on one of those rendered images
from the PC game "Myst"!
perfect piece of work!
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... superb modeling, very much Riven-esque indeed... I especially like the subtle textures added to the dome, as well as the steps leading to the entrance... some great details in this... I like this a lot!
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this is looking amazing dude, the work you are putting in is paying off!!
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Looking good altermind. The modeling is very nice.
I think possibly the image is a little bright. The sky (although probably accurate) is very blue and even and the trees are very green.
I think darkening those areas just a little and adding more colour variance (the trees mainly) would help.
Great work though !
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not bad. perhaps a little more colour variation in the leaves?
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You do realize that I would do virtually anything for those skills, right? Heh. The modeling is fantastic, the textrues are amazing and I love it overall. Just gotta work on those leaves a bit
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wow.
that is pretty damn cool.
i wanna live there.
the myst games always amazed me.
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