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amaranthineries — Deja Vu
Published: 2008-07-26 08:05:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I've almost surely been here before,
though your words tumble
differently: the syntax
is all wrong, all wrong.

Let me rephrase.
This tree looks familiar,
these fields a secretive shade
for which I feel the bearer,
this crisp blanket and
cool night,
chilled wine and
chattering teeth.

This tree looks familiar,
and so do you,
though your smile now
sickens me, all wrong.
All wrong.

How then came I to be,
came you to me,
yet not quite ever
a starry signal:
and how did I not
feel them falling
all along?
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Comments: 3

ScribbledNotes [2008-07-27 00:07:01 +0000 UTC]

I do like this, but the connection isn't working for me in my mind since this is listed under Spiritual. :/ Explain to this poor lad!

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amaranthineries In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-09-03 05:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Aaaah, I see this more focused on the feeling I get in my chest, rather than the more literal content. It's more the energy of the moment than the moment...I'm not sure if I'm making sense.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to amaranthineries [2008-09-03 07:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes, you are! I understand now. I guess I was thinking in more of the traditional, regular sense than this way. Which is actually better! These categories are soooooo confusing at times, aren't they?

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