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Published: 2007-04-08 20:22:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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My Natalielives near metal giants
surging with electricity.
And she's well acquainted
with Love.
I am not.
But she assures me
that it's worth
all the trouble the observer sees.
I wish she'd teach me personally.
My Natalie
lives near thriving masses
alight with big-city mentality.
And she knows how to move
through the systems.
I get lost.
But she tells me
it comes with practice,
a destination's not hard to find.
I still don't know mine.
But I'd marry her
and offer my soul,
if she'd tell me
all there is to know
about her.
My Natalie
spells my name with two 't's
when she sends me letters
by Canadian post.
She calls me her Sunshine,
her Darling Girl,
but we both know
that long-distance can't work.
Someday I'll care for her
and know Love in the flesh,
speak quiet words in the dark
with her head on my chest.
Someday I'll marry her,
I'll give her my soul,
ask her to tell me
all there is to know
about her.
Comments: 9
Zomai [2007-04-09 02:12:52 +0000 UTC]
Here goes, trying not to hide behind humour.... I know, I know, I know. I want you to be here and I want to call you mine and your boy makes me so terribly, terrible jealous. Couldn't we all just grow up a little and make everything better? =\
(....and I am so mortified that your name isn't spelled with two's t's.)
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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2007-04-09 03:08:13 +0000 UTC]
And I want to be there, and I want to be yours. =/ More than I can say, which is why I wrote this.
(Oh, honey, it is. Brittany. But I meant "Britt". You know, it's weird, because all of my life people have spelled it "Brit" and it didn't look right to me. You're the first person to spell it "Britt", and it finally looks like it's spelled right.)
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Zomai In reply to amaranthineries [2007-04-09 21:18:05 +0000 UTC]
I know... well for a while I didn't and that sucked. Thank you... and I don't know. Someday?
(Okay good 'cause then I was seriously going to just flatline. x_x )
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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2007-04-12 22:07:06 +0000 UTC]
Someday...that's the idea.
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Zomai In reply to amaranthineries [2007-04-12 22:56:29 +0000 UTC]
(And I'd totally fave this but that's way to narcissistic, even for me. Mental fave!)
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