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Published: 2007-03-04 06:59:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description
I walk cobblestone streetsand brightly lit avenues,
cities full of life
and traces of ghosts.
History haunts,
clacks with each step.
Still,
I'd give the world to forget.
Flash to:
a theatre,
cold hardwood flooring,
the echoes of piano
and a vibrant voice
killed by wine
poorly aged.
Steeped in mystery.
The junkie's soliloquy.
Sing us a song,
came cries from the crowd.
While they miss
the whispered melody line,
most beautiful song
never heard.
Imagine:
an empty table
balancing three glasses
and two halves of a soul.
Destination for the lost.
Pegged dangerous alone.
Sing me a song,
he requests with a frown.
With his peacock poise
worn to a man's curiousity.
I nurse his chocolate gaze,
unforeseen tragedy.
Take a breath and
watch him dissolve again.
Most beautiful song...
House of ghosts.
Useless nights, spent
with susurrations of
the hopeless dead.
I walk the world to escape.
But they follow in my stead.
Comments: 11
amaranthineries In reply to failure-of-faith [2007-06-22 05:48:10 +0000 UTC]
^.^ Thank you, dahling! I try.
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Zomai [2007-03-06 02:56:00 +0000 UTC]
That reminds me so, so much of a character I'm creating for drama class, like whoa. o_o
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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2007-03-07 06:19:00 +0000 UTC]
^.^ I love how you described this. I had seriously never considered it the way you took it.
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Zomai In reply to amaranthineries [2007-03-08 03:46:52 +0000 UTC]
Well I can get loopey when it's late.
AHAH! It was also because I saw his hiding behind the flashy dresses and the songs, and the lost pain of it all... and the peacock feathers... yeah. x_o;;;
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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2007-03-16 05:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Had to have peacock comparisons in there, what with all the flash. I think you've got it pretty much down, babe, you've noticed all that I meant the reader to notice.
(whooooa late reply!)
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Zomai In reply to amaranthineries [2007-03-16 17:38:04 +0000 UTC]
(No kidding. Crawl out from under you bed, sweetie. )
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GhstsInSnow [2007-03-05 06:29:02 +0000 UTC]
I think you switched to buttsecks poems instead. That's the vibe I'm getting.
(especially because of the VG prompt. )
BUT I LUFF IT. IT IS WICKED GOOD.
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amaranthineries In reply to GhstsInSnow [2007-03-07 06:19:45 +0000 UTC]
Bwaha, I just can't get teh gay out of my system apparently. XD VG is just so inspiring that way.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
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