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Published: 2007-11-23 09:01:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Letter layersplacement complacent
and flying broken words,
mistranslated, reissued, spliced.
Where do they live
inside me?
Cigarette burns,
tars my lungs,
don't give me
enough, I'll always
be out. Need no
pity, give me your eye,
your cigarette burns mine.
You caricature,
you vile resistance,
you unawares,
scared,
you bug,
listening in.
"This is intense,"
he says,
but maybe not for long.
Miss it, make-believe.
Sorry you,
I hated being your responsibility before,
so I simply will-out anymore--
be a still heart, a reverse birth,
and never be beautiful in my/your eyes.
Be silent, voice less opinions,
no matter how right,
because this is wrong.
Comments: 7
amaranthineries In reply to GhstsInSnow [2007-12-06 07:13:15 +0000 UTC]
You're amazing. <3 Your consistent commenting is amazing. Your hat is amazing. I haven't seen it, but I'm sure it is.
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GhstsInSnow In reply to amaranthineries [2007-12-06 13:21:33 +0000 UTC]
...which hat? XD I only have two.
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ScribbledNotes [2007-11-26 00:16:04 +0000 UTC]
Interesting method. Kinda like an extreme stream of conscious way of doing it. Coolness.
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amaranthineries In reply to ScribbledNotes [2007-12-06 07:13:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's what I figured. ^.^; Transcending mental barriers and such. It's fun.
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